| Re: Slowing - or, A Love Poem with Eggs and Short Lines by zodiac |
some deleted user 81.69.23.196 |
1-Jun-05/5:24 AM |
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Closing lines:
'Don't think me a fool for this
she says
I know exactly what time it is.'
Unless you consider the two-line consistency a holy must?
'or find my lips
not fast enough. She says
don't think me a fool for this
I know exactly what time it is.'
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| Re: Fucking Lonely by hobojo |
some deleted user 81.69.23.196 |
1-Jun-05/5:41 AM |
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As a pro-depressive this poem will make you feel wonderfully pooped again.
If ever a poem enforces someone's 'inabilities, self-pity, hate, weakness'; it's this one. Were I a chronic depressive poet, I would, after reading this, commit suicide on the spot. Which would make you a i-killer.
This is the sort of poetry I call 'masturbatory'. I really hate this one.
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| Re: My back (An explanation) by Stephen Robins |
some deleted user 81.69.23.196 |
1-Jun-05/7:21 AM |
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Metrics, um, jiggle a bit...
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| Re: My back (An explanation) by Stephen Robins |
wFraser Allonby Q.C.w 195.157.153.249 |
1-Jun-05/8:02 AM |
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This is the best poem to have appeared on Poemranker since "The Huntsman's Secret".
Yours &c.
Henry Trumpington-Pigg
P.S. As you may have noticed, rockmage has a very bad case of AIDS, caused primarily by his excessive gayness.
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lil_evil_boi 70.68.76.244 |
1-Jun-05/6:04 PM |
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Definitely a 10. Good use of words and i fin it very powerful. Keep the good work up!!
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| Re: Best Friends by lil_evil_boi |
some deleted user 81.69.23.196 |
1-Jun-05/6:24 PM |
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...Looking for God, perhaps?
Or Ben Affleck?
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some deleted user 81.69.23.196 |
1-Jun-05/7:10 PM |
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'TwentyFIRST century wails'. How time flies, on broomsticks.
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xxx 68.164.242.151 |
1-Jun-05/7:35 PM |
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I knew you had a modicum of talent.
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| Re: Truckers should not be poets by INTRANSIT |
some deleted user 81.69.23.196 |
1-Jun-05/7:57 PM |
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
cockmage 80.58.44.44 |
2-Jun-05/12:25 AM |
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Say goodbye to your website hippie
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cockmage 80.58.44.44 |
2-Jun-05/12:26 AM |
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Say goodbye to your website hippie
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cockmage 80.58.44.44 |
2-Jun-05/12:26 AM |
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Say goodbye to your website hippie
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cockmage 80.58.44.44 |
2-Jun-05/12:27 AM |
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Say goodbye to your website hippie
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cockmage 80.58.44.44 |
2-Jun-05/12:27 AM |
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Say goodbye to your website hippie
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cockmage 80.58.44.44 |
2-Jun-05/12:28 AM |
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Say goodbye to your website hippie
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cockmage 80.58.44.44 |
2-Jun-05/12:28 AM |
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Say goodbye to your website hippie
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cockmage 80.58.44.44 |
2-Jun-05/12:29 AM |
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Say goodbye to your website hippie. Bored now, jeez you must have patience or be on more drugs than it looks! Back to my port-scans. :)
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cockmage 80.58.44.44 |
2-Jun-05/12:34 AM |
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By "objects of beauty" are you referring to the piles of scrap wood nailed together on your "soon-to-be-gone" site?
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| Re: Fair Warning by cockmage |
Stephen Robins 213.146.148.199 |
2-Jun-05/3:03 AM |
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Please keep the picture of his beard.
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| Re: Heaven or Hell by lil_evil_boi |
zodiac 213.186.178.93 |
2-Jun-05/3:55 AM |
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The best part was where you described heaven as "heavenly" and hell as "hellish".
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