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Dovina on Internet Junkie by cuddlytiger17 27 Jul 2005, 6:26 AM
Please, don`t devalue my life!
Dovina on some deleted poem 27 Jul 2005, 6:25 AM
Tiny bubbles in the wine, a song and a feeling. Not bad.
jessicazee on Showtime by INTRANSIT 28 Jul 2005, 1:41 AM
You totally should have stayed up. Don't capitalize "cicadas." Also, I love this. 9.8
Dan garcia-Black on The Worst Poem Ever Created (edited) by drnick 28 Jul 2005, 7:11 PM
If the poem had ended at the word orgasm it would be a ten. The :) and comment suck the joyous insanity out of this poem.-6- for getting it half right.
Dan garcia-Black on What?! by drnick 28 Jul 2005, 7:13 PM
Great last line.
Dan garcia-Black on Suicide by jessicazee 28 Jul 2005, 7:17 PM
Girl, you got poem bearing lips.
Dan garcia-Black on a love not meant to be by nentwined 28 Jul 2005, 7:22 PM
We all have a crack in our base but we keep on trying. As another poet on this site said earlier, "Why have the choice if we never choose?" Keep sticking your hand into the clay, Netwined. You'll get there someday.
Dan garcia-Black on Showtime by INTRANSIT 28 Jul 2005, 7:24 PM
Was this at a garden after dinner? I was busy getting twenty pieces of silver from my NEW powerful friends at the time.
zodiac on some deleted poem 29 Jul 2005, 4:01 AM
I wondered why none of the people you thought about were Arabs. Then I read your reply to Dovina below. Good job. We SHOULD feel bad about everybody except them. Love from Arabia, zodiac
Dovina on some deleted poem 27 Jul 2005, 6:20 AM
I have difficulty making the connection between the events in the poem and the last verse where it`s related to belief in God.
Dovina on some deleted poem 27 Jul 2005, 6:32 AM
The last verse begins tenderly and redemptively, but I wish you`d not use `rage of jealousy.` The better ending would resolve the issue, as I think it can be resolved.
zodiac on Worth by Dovina 28 Jul 2005, 12:11 AM
What's with the commas for apostrophes?
Dovina on a love not meant to be by nentwined 28 Jul 2005, 7:02 AM
Why must such a love be not meant? Or not workable? "combed together" seems odd for liquid and concrete.
drnick on some deleted poem 28 Jul 2005, 10:18 PM
God damnit, that's good humor.
drnick on some deleted poem 28 Jul 2005, 10:23 PM
I went to Indio, Ca. and camped out, so perhaps the imagery was too easy/wonderful for me...but I dont care. This was bad ass!
zodiac on The Worst Poem Ever Created (edited) by drnick 29 Jul 2005, 4:43 AM
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zodiac on End of Me by sonawrote 29 Jul 2005, 4:15 AM
Arabic is the most etymologically simple language I've ever heard of. For example, the Arabic slang word for "shit" is a combination of the roots "end" and "ball". The Qurannic word for "shit" is a combination of "to put onesself outside" and "oil".
zodiac on My Mornings were Filled with Nightmares and Pies by T. Jonathron Remp 29 Jul 2005, 4:18 AM
"Sweet smelling clouds Darken my skies" is the best description of the men's tent at an Arab wedding I've ever read.
zodiac on Internet Junkie by cuddlytiger17 29 Jul 2005, 4:22 AM
Hey, you're right. It IS so much better than reality.
zodiac on Polar Bearings by impert&ent 29 Jul 2005, 4:30 AM
Seriously, that's kind of clever. Because the only way you couldn't draw a line around the earth to pass between two objects is if one was on top of the other.