Fucking hilarious. Take 0/10.

Fascist Yid rubbish. Israel should be wiped off the face of the earth.

Hilariously appalling. It could easily be part of the Yank National Anthem

Fabbo. May God bugger himself.

It's sketchy, as if meant for some special person. I'd have to ask you to fill in the gaps before I could say much more.

First 2 lines are good. Then it runs amok, without more to go on.

Sir, your poem in comments is better...however the one posted is good too...I thought of war and dying...helplessness and pain...sad thoughts but that is what popped into my mind... :) Bethy

I read this twice...pause...three times...dito on science and speculation(Dovina)...second last para is my fav part...:) Bethy

I don't know why but I get it...I've been wearing a single shoe for 7 years...lol :) Bethy

The title seems too narrow, since this is about more than quantum mechanics. It’s a kind of wandering theory of everything, where supernovae is misspelled. It’s a mixture of science and speculation, and edges on preaching. But you avoid that trap and stop after saying that we humans are, in your opinion, not separate entities as we suppose, but part of some organic whole. I’d like it better if it held closer to real science until the end, as it does in much of it, delaying “the inseparable cosmic web” idea. I think that would make your last verse more powerful.

Is this about life...longevity...spontanious combustion...without an inner fire, one could fizzel out...??? This is what I got from your lyrics...am I anywhere close? I'll vote later... :) Bethy

very good, I like this form of language...It appeals to one of my other lives...:) :) Bethy

poo poo head...I hate it that your talent is so natural and raw!!! Have a sunny day :) Bethy

I love this kind of "other verse" I write alot of it...I will post my sweater poem soon as well...it was written many moons ago...:) Bethy

My life in jeopardy Mudered in cold blood, that's what I'm gonna be I ain't been home since Friday night and now my wife is coming after me...

This is fantastic!! a little hard to read...more flow and its a go for me... :) Bethy

A poetic story of canine reality...fun to read, my son loved it! he gives you a 9 and I gave you a 7, so...we compromised with an 8 :) Bethy

nigh unto scent a mint simple but half way good

Writers block, It's easier if you try to eat Cherrio's with a fork. :) Bethy

This is the level of mediocrity to which the majority of us aspire.