Jeremi B. Handrinos
on some deleted poem
14 Oct 2003, 2:10 PM
A dose of something... indeed.
way to rule a website. i'm sure it pays off severely in your personal life.
PLEASE COMENT ON FRASER ALLONBY'S POEMS!
You should flog yourself with it (the soggy thing) haycock as many of these discarded fuzzy critters together as you can and we'll gas them up and jump into the piles with lit cigarretes! For a big Joke! Aint that creative! We'll call it "The anti shriners foundation" and march on pennys.
Much better than I would have done with the same subject. I've come across more than one separated-from-it's-owner stuffed animal in my travels. i always wonder what happened to the owner.
This is the first time I've bourne witness to the lighting 'up' of a queef, and rest my soul this will be the last.
google this, fucker!
Beautiful and sanguine 9
Loved the way you wrapped up S1 with the last 4 lines, speaks volumes about family values, appreciation of nature over social disdain.
Just one of those poems i want to read as i get something from it.
The last one of your poems was partly responsible for my poem 'Brighton Beach' i would appreciate your views on it good or bad.....Please.
Wow shorter than a haiku and speaking as loud with less - impressed - maybe we could have a new category called >>>>>>>>> Shorts 8
Please explain the last 2 lines.
Are you feeling okay? I only found the use of anus once
some deleted user
on some deleted poem
14 Oct 2003, 6:14 PM
Quite humorous. 10.
some deleted user
on some deleted poem
14 Oct 2003, 6:21 PM
Nice job.
some deleted user
on some deleted poem
14 Oct 2003, 6:21 PM
Nice.
some deleted user
on some deleted poem
14 Oct 2003, 6:23 PM
Beautifully done...I wish I had a tribute to me...
some deleted user
on some deleted poem
14 Oct 2003, 6:25 PM
Very funny! 10.
some deleted user
on some deleted poem
14 Oct 2003, 6:27 PM
Funny stuff!
some deleted user
on some deleted poem
14 Oct 2003, 6:28 PM
I have had plenty of parodies, but no tributes! Lucky fairy!
some deleted user
on some deleted poem
14 Oct 2003, 6:29 PM
Well done...but why is there a syringe?