xxx
on some deleted poem
15 Oct 2003, 10:35 AM
A truely wonderful song. You make the boredom zing.
Just a simple complaint! Does not make a good poem. Where is the angst. Not even a good insult!
how wonderfully ironic!
not to be televised, live.
one who?
most excerrent.
does a failing libido equal celibacy? Stick to musing.
You're a avian Carlos the Jackel? Tel me please what satisfaction you get from writing these little inconsquential stories?
Why do I keep believing I might actually find some poetry here?
some deleted user
on Addicted to the agony of waiting for something you love by Mister Cakes
15 Oct 2003, 1:28 PM
I am caught in a whisper, when I try to shout: this is exactly how I've once felt. Eyery word is like a sentence, every sentence like a book. waiting in vain for someone you love...how beautiful sad!
No. However, it did cause an awful lot of people to write bad Czechs.
some deleted user
on some deleted poem
15 Oct 2003, 2:45 PM
Your bum happened.
i like how it feels in my mouth.
If nothing else, at least it resonates. Somehow.
A little too sentimental for me, made me think of the time i left a teddy bear uner a tree and it moulded. Good use of language, though.
I have the same experience before my morning dose of ketamine.
Funny as hell; very clever!
my favorite: "*Nude thirds of all nudely-weds cannot afford to buy a nude home, a nude
survey reveals. âWeâre thinking of emigrating to Nudefoundland,â say Mr
amd Mrs John Nude."
(it's still nude a God Damned sonnet...)
Why bother? You're defeating yourself.