What a cool idea for a poem! I like the unexpected and how it came together at the end! Nice work. . .10

shhhh. they'll market that too.

Witness the genius of my gay lover. The one, thee only, -=Settle=-, the poetry of.

I think such an explicit poem about rape is very insensitive. But then that's just my personal opinion.

Savory display is a totally bodacious line to end a haiku with. However, the previous lines do not do it justice. I suggest something like: Oh, such tasty treats, Sausage rolls and cheese pasties, Savory display.

I think smoking is naughty, guns or otherwise.

I gave this poem a -1-, because I couldn't be bothered to scroll down the "Please Vote" menu to display the zero option.

Have you evet seen "The Fall and Rise of Reginal Perin"?

Once I went on a night out with the lads. We got so drunk that we stole a traffic cone. Can you believe it? Boy, that was a crazy night, I can tell you. Never again... ;-)

The Big Lowboskis know.

For another 10 quid i'll let you spank me with a blazing quail attached (impaled) to a stick.

I also hold a muave belt in cream of some young guy and french cooking.

The Cornling (ahchoo) by Somebody, dear god anybody! Crouching under shucks of Orville Redinbahchers'. Soon his nuts will pop.

A jejunal act of devotion.

I kind of liked it, and often envision people missing me that passionately.

Better.

great poem, i can feel the emotion, keep up the good work 10

A fine poem with fine words and fine meanings.

One of those raped mountains looks back at me every time I look west. Probably a strip mine for coal, but with the same effect. Sucks huh?

Of course, I've come in after correction, but I like the theme. Sounds great to me. This is the reason I love this site. Thank Kaolin for me.