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on some deleted poem
28 Jan 2004, 11:08 AM
Got to watch out for the Blue Jays!
you have major talent i wish i wrote like you do....not a whole lot has appealed to me yet but yours seems to be real.
Very truthful
your right most poets are assholes....i dont consider myself an ass hole....but i also dont honestly consider myself a poet....go figure?
i think your shit is true....
I really loved this poem it brightened up the rest of my day not having to believe all poets are tight asses
Heres a 10 for you....i usually dont throw those around!!!!
I see you.
MEDIOCRITY CODE
9004B021
http://www.mycgiserver.com/~prawne/code.
Flasheart: Ever felt the wind in your hair, Blackadder?
Blackadder: No...
(phrrrt)
Flasheart: He just has, WOOF WOOF!
i really like this one id give it a 10+ but youll have to setle with a mere 10
I weep for you, who will not thrill at the ions purging before the cleanse.
Pimple. I'm surprised at you. Don't worry, my last was an utter flop.
<keeps me fellow> I think mellow would work better here. Nice and depressing. 8
If there's one thing rosicrucians do well it's write good hells. You and Michael Wigglesworth.
"smoke up the moon" - Hell yeah! Smoke it up!
You understand? You're not going to get a fair representation of what we think of your thought, imagery, etc., because it looks like misspelled kid writing in squiggle pen. Half of poetry is just projecting the illusion of being a real writer.
Before you post a bunch of stuff that's just like the poems you deleted, consider using capital I's and punctuation, which are still standard parts of English grammar and have the bonus of making your poems look more like poems and less like hack notebook scribblings.
A deeply, deeply lewd piece.
Slow down... your going to fast. It's alright to use a spell checker sometimes.
Yep! Leaves do fall
um, cinquain is 2,4,6,8,2
not the meter you have here
please use form properly if you are going to use it