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Spark (Free verse) by penguin fiend You laughed in my face
When I was confused
When I felt ready to explode
You lit the fuse
I made our bed
You lied in it
I wanted to keep running
You made me quit
This is what tears you
Apart from the norm
This is what makes me
Breathe hatred in it's purest form
Up the ladder:
The Beach
Down the ladder:
Intersection
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Posted: January 27, 2004 6:20 PM PST; Last modified: January 27, 2004 6:20 PM PSTWeighted score: 5.1490035 Overall Rank: 5312 Comments:
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deleted user @ 208.25.247.107
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27-Jan-04/6:51 PM
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you have major talent i wish i wrote like you do....not a whole lot has appealed to me yet but yours seems to be real.
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