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Spark (Free verse) by penguin fiend

You laughed in my face When I was confused When I felt ready to explode You lit the fuse I made our bed You lied in it I wanted to keep running You made me quit This is what tears you Apart from the norm This is what makes me Breathe hatred in it's purest form

Santeria 27-Jan-04/6:51 PM
you have major talent i wish i wrote like you do....not a whole lot has appealed to me yet but yours seems to be real.




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