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Fool (Free verse) by ez2replace
I was deranged and confused
you seemed amused
with my misery and pain
drowning in the rain
i hang on to your every word
i want to cry when you hurt
to kiss you makes me weep
the taste of your lips
haunts me in my sleep
i never got to say goodbye
now all that is left is a lie
i need relief
a message sent to me
to find out if we were meant to be
everyday withouy u is empty and cold
a deep void is tearing at my soul
you made me complete
i must accept defeat
and realize
im all alone
avert your eyes
i'll pretend not to cry
for your sake i will be strong
and try to move on
i've been replaced
you've said this to my face
you may not want me to
but i will always love you
as crazy as it may seem
you are the image of my dreams
i still believe it is real
i'll sleep so i dont have to feel
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Arithmetic Mean: 7.0
Weighted score: 5.2384057
Overall Rank: 4074
Posted: January 20, 2004 12:55 PM PST; Last modified: January 20, 2004 12:55 PM PST
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