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Fool (Free verse) by ez2replace
I was deranged and confused you seemed amused with my misery and pain drowning in the rain i hang on to your every word i want to cry when you hurt to kiss you makes me weep the taste of your lips haunts me in my sleep i never got to say goodbye now all that is left is a lie i need relief a message sent to me to find out if we were meant to be everyday withouy u is empty and cold a deep void is tearing at my soul you made me complete i must accept defeat and realize im all alone avert your eyes i'll pretend not to cry for your sake i will be strong and try to move on i've been replaced you've said this to my face you may not want me to but i will always love you as crazy as it may seem you are the image of my dreams i still believe it is real i'll sleep so i dont have to feel

Up the ladder: Diptych
Down the ladder: My Resuscitating Love

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Arithmetic Mean: 7.0
Weighted score: 5.2384057
Overall Rank: 4074
Posted: January 20, 2004 12:55 PM PST; Last modified: January 20, 2004 12:55 PM PST
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[10] penguin fiend @ 216.207.132.167 | 20-Jan-04/6:52 PM | Reply
pretend i gave you a 10.5, cuz this is better than most of the perfect poems out there
[10] deleted user @ 208.28.223.78 | 28-Jan-04/7:29 AM | Reply
i really like this one id give it a 10+ but youll have to setle with a mere 10
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