Re: Words that the Earth has to say… by nothingtoanyone	24-Apr-04/5:56 AM
"too late, too late"....
Re: a comment on Biography I (1996) by halofriendly	22-Apr-04/2:45 PM
Do I admit to my ignorance by not knowing who any of those people are? Anyway, what can I say? I wrote that when I was 16....;)
Re: a comment on untitled by halofriendly	22-Apr-04/2:40 PM
Yes and no. Haha. When I was a kid, I would wake up in the middle of the night and I'd have this super-sensitive feeling all over me, like I couldn't touch anything, but I had to. Weird and hard to explain....I would also hear these voices yelling, but in whispers inside my head. I know I sound psychotic typing this, but yeah. It went away after awhile and then materialized again during my senior high school year in my history class.
Re: a comment on in the hands by halofriendly	22-Apr-04/2:36 PM
Eh, I just liked the imagery it gave me when I wrote it. The person is caught in darkness, seemingly never to wake up again and all they want is sunshine to stream in every window....I decided to use the verb "smear" to give a sense of sunshine being painted all over the room...
Re: a comment on perfection show by halofriendly	22-Apr-04/2:33 PM
24/F/OH Thanks for the welcome. Someone posted this site on a message board, so I thought I'd check it out. I haven't written for a few months...experiencing a writer's block of sorts...so I'm just posting stuff up that I've written within the past 10 years.
Re: **The Therapist** by scitz	21-Apr-04/6:41 PM
I have definitely had this kind of experience in a counseling session before...wow.
Re: American Haiku 2 by memorybabe	21-Apr-04/6:34 PM
Did you spell "Des Moines" as one word on purpose?
Re: Spring Haiku by Staika	21-Apr-04/5:59 PM
VERY good imagery
Re: Wife beater t-shirt by bondjedi	21-Apr-04/5:58 PM
Very sad...good, simplistic imagery.