on Words that the Earth has to say⦠by nothingtoanyone
24 Apr 2004, 5:56 AM
"too late, too late"....
replying on Biography I (1996) by halofriendly
22 Apr 2004, 2:45 PM
Do I admit to my ignorance by not knowing who any of those people are? Anyway, what can I say? I wrote that when I was 16....;)
replying on untitled by halofriendly
22 Apr 2004, 2:40 PM
Yes and no. Haha. When I was a kid, I would wake up in the middle of the night and I'd have this super-sensitive feeling all over me, like I couldn't touch anything, but I had to. Weird and hard to explain....I would also hear these voices yelling, but in whispers inside my head. I know I sound psychotic typing this, but yeah. It went away after awhile and then materialized again during my senior high school year in my history class.
replying on in the hands by halofriendly
22 Apr 2004, 2:36 PM
Eh, I just liked the imagery it gave me when I wrote it. The person is caught in darkness, seemingly never to wake up again and all they want is sunshine to stream in every window....I decided to use the verb "smear" to give a sense of sunshine being painted all over the room...
replying on perfection show by halofriendly
22 Apr 2004, 2:33 PM
24/F/OH Thanks for the welcome. Someone posted this site on a message board, so I thought I'd check it out. I haven't written for a few months...experiencing a writer's block of sorts...so I'm just posting stuff up that I've written within the past 10 years.
on **The Therapist** by scitz
21 Apr 2004, 6:41 PM
I have definitely had this kind of experience in a counseling session before...wow.
on American Haiku 2 by memorybabe
21 Apr 2004, 6:34 PM
Did you spell "Des Moines" as one word on purpose?
on Spring Haiku by Staika
21 Apr 2004, 5:59 PM
VERY good imagery
on Wife beater t-shirt by bondjedi
21 Apr 2004, 5:58 PM
Very sad...good, simplistic imagery.