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in the hands (Free verse) by halofriendly
I am
laying there in
the arms of Morpheus and
You
wish I would leave the dream realm
behind me.
In the darkness,
I look uptight as a
nightmare
digs its claws deeper into my
subconscious.
You
want to smear sunshine all
over
me and my room, but
there is none to be found
at this hour. And
you wait
helplessly as I shriek in
fear when
the monster haunts
my mind and forces me to
continue
my sleep. He whispers,
"There will be no awakening tonight."
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Posted: April 21, 2004 6:29 PM PDT; Last modified: April 21, 2004 6:29 PM PDT
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me and my mom, but
there is none to be found
at this hour."
But seriously ... I don't understand the idea of "smearing sunshine".
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