| Re: Gut Feeling, A Burst of by liquidlama |
18-Aug-02/5:37 AM |
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Full of wit and slit. This poem is saucy to say the least. Beautiful style and story.T
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| Re: ~Witchcraft~ by Lenore |
18-Aug-02/5:38 AM |
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| Re: uh oh by evergreen |
18-Aug-02/10:20 AM |
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Now right a version from their perspective...here allow me in haiku for you....With beer goggles on/I scraped the barrels bottom/There's your barking gash!
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18-Aug-02/4:21 PM |
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The Bel-garian and mallorean series were very entertaining to say the least. The high hunt sucked Sauron's turd corn though. Mr. Eddings had a way with story telling. Do you agree to disagree, or really not give a rat's ass Because his work has just never been interesting to you.
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| Re: The Big Blue White Guy by Modulo |
18-Aug-02/4:25 PM |
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In a class all it's own! Special ed.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
19-Aug-02/2:43 PM |
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Yeah Dark One, that's redeckulouse, and obserde! tosey the leste. How dare you deprive a beautiful seventeen year old wolf who loves bottled kittens her beautiful world saving opinion, or mongrel saving opinion, you sir have a hamster wheel powered lima bean shaped heart that beats backwards. Of all the nerve! Wear the scarlet letter of shame and dunce hat the madness that twirls from under your plundering demeanor. You are just plain mean.
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19-Aug-02/10:42 PM |
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you're absolutely right p&k, but they also share another mutual aspect, they all left after high school, or a four year college to get masters degrees at other schools out of the midwest, or went and lived in new york, europe and a few other spots to get published, then moved back later to live out the rest of their lives...enjoying the real pleasures of the midwest, family bonds, food friends, fishing drinking, and sitting just plain lovingly bored... and of course the one of a kind down home atmosphere....you do, on the other hand, have something in common with all of them other than location...you have the need to create and the know how talent to both publish and respect the difference between those that might and those that 'will'. you sir will...goodnight and god bless.. your friend jeremi britt handrinos..
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19-Aug-02/11:42 PM |
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i expected so much more from one of a witch's most trusted spell componts...use should eat raw a handfull of your names root, it could help your simplicity, "become".
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
19-Aug-02/11:45 PM |
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If you can't enjoy yourself alone..Who can you enjoy yourself with?
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| Re: a moment through the window of a northbound commuter train by dave78981 |
19-Aug-02/11:50 PM |
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Enjoyably morbid...race on to your destinations!
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
19-Aug-02/11:54 PM |
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N. Tesla used the staff of herme's trigamestus for so many more interesting developments. You should too. Develop, or bust the thermometer and poison the bare feet.
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| Re: Loss by dave78981 |
19-Aug-02/11:57 PM |
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to personally aloof, how are we supposed to know what this really means to you? this is for you, not us. so, journal your burn elsewhere. or make it more available for us to enjoy also..
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| Re: American Haiku by memorybabe |
19-Aug-02/11:59 PM |
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Or back to where it originatd from...the horse drawn wagon.
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| Re: Untitled by purplestain |
20-Aug-02/12:01 AM |
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Someday someone will show you how to write, hopefully before you try again..
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| Re: American Haiku 2 by memorybabe |
20-Aug-02/12:09 AM |
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Look up haiku..please for the love of writing..this is barely even freeform..this is barely even bare....god let it fucking end...please. here i'll show you a real haiku.............ready...good....../memorybabe writes/what she hopes might be haikus/It's a shame they're not/..................see not hard at all, see, it goes 5/7/5. count or be eaten alive..better luck next time deary..
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| Re: seven rings by memorybabe |
20-Aug-02/12:13 AM |
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When my phone rings seven times then stops..that's satan saying ..goodnight my sweet child eating minion..on that note..i wish you all sweet dreams...
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| Re: Dear Ms. Sexton by <{Baba^Yaga}> |
20-Aug-02/12:47 PM |
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keep on driving your ford across america sweety cuz your haikus are so important and stimulating, memory babe, memorybabe..you really have let me down...i hope you don't ever stop driving, we need more people like you looking for a life in a better place. i hope you find it...do me a favor pick up as many hitchhikers with scary bags that you possibly can. it's worth it. trust me. everyone! let's read memorybabes emotionally rewarding haikus. trust me they're way fucking worth it. if for any reason. what not to do..ever.
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| Re: Dear Ms. Sexton by <{Baba^Yaga}> |
20-Aug-02/1:03 PM |
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wow.. christ of..not withstanding the bachus tyrade? i am bachus you comprehending master of reading into things (i just finished one for you called gangbox, at gangbox.com under mp3, it's for you, the holy ghost, and ponchus pilot, enjoy) that bacchian tyrade was for earthtalker the queen of the uknseen..and for an encore, read why bachus want's to kill opie, then keep talking shit cuz i have all kinds of ' good stuff waiting for you too sweet cheeks..me and my 'team' are construing a great animated series, just for you guys, let me know if your balls have dropped yet so my animators can be anatomically accurate, thanks..anything else christoff? just let me know if i can help you with any thing anything at all, cuz i'm here for you young man...waiting.....you're gonna love it when it's done, and you're friend's will too...keep an eye out...i hope you have a stronger stomach then writing style, cuz this is really gonna piss you the fuck off...better buy a gun, or a faster keyboard..you're gonna need it. love your 'grandma dying forgotten in a retirement home getting mouth raped by paco the knee hung orderly'. prepare! p.s i'm just kidding, i really like you, if not love you...see my cross hanging between my ample powerful pectorial muscles, smile and hang well young man, hang like your mothers beef curtains...feel free to quote it all at the retirement home..loverboy....i will.
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| Re: Dear Ms. Sexton by <{Baba^Yaga}> |
20-Aug-02/1:13 PM |
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yeah..you're write d.a., have no fear my work is almost done here..i've just been using this site to get my rants on..then i cut and paste it all in a word file, chop, chop, chop it up edit the fuck out of it, and use the material for this top secret writng experiment, we've got shaved monkeys hooked up to more lab equipment than i care to describe(cuz i can't) the govs got my family held hostage until i finish, oh , by the way...they're onto you too..so lock the doors and bar the windows...don't let them get you under their thumb man..i haven't slept in two weeks and they've been feeding me lysergic acid dipped meal worms....plus this site is hardly the muse i wanted for creative inspiratiuon, but no ...they don't care...they just telepathically send me the agenda, and hold the straight blade to mothers jugular...i am so fucking scared, and traumatized...i don't think i'll last much longer..pray for me..please!
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| Re: The Ultimate~Creep goes to Mecca! by Bachus |
20-Aug-02/1:26 PM |
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hey z..worry not..i don't get mad. i just pretend too..please, after browsing his shite..i lol! anyway..what a joke..i'm seriously concerned for the future of writing though...don't mention it by the way (my cordial invite)..any time...i'm shower bound see you in 30 minutes. loved your re-edit of warmer climes ..i might have to move my computer locations soon...the illiterate children are scythed handed and mob clustered in the streets outside all of my hideouts...theyre so damn cute and little bussed in their motivations...you've almost gotta respect that.right? right!
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