| Re: AIDS in a van by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
31-Aug-02/3:44 AM |
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you sick, sick man. Whats your fascination with the virus?
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| Re: Passion's Flashes by RaychelW |
31-Aug-02/3:33 AM |
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Some spell binding imagery, I shall follow your work Rach.
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| Re: Passion's Flashes by RaychelW |
31-Aug-02/3:33 AM |
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Some spell binding imagery, I shall follow your work Rach.
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| Re: Passion's Flashes by RaychelW |
31-Aug-02/3:33 AM |
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Some spell binding imagery, I shall follow your work Rach.
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| Re: spirit of a grama by livingcanvas |
31-Aug-02/3:17 AM |
I will most certainly follow your work after perusing this fragile little gem. Love the way you have controlled your emotions from verse to verse, each creating there own individual statements that are as bold as brass.
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| Re: The Stifling Moment by vulcan |
31-Aug-02/3:06 AM |
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I agree with Mojo, an air of ambiguity leaves asking why do I find this seemingly morbid piece so enrapturing
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| Re: Love and Marriage in Da Nang by Tascobar |
29-Aug-02/7:33 AM |
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| Re: Follow by unknown |
24-Aug-02/7:50 AM |
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Reference to a 'retinal flare' is a particularly haunting image in this somewhat eerie piece. A very moving 1984esque style that snares the imagination. You have a fan Ant - 9/10.
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| Re: Out Doubt! by wlshepherd |
24-Aug-02/7:44 AM |
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Shrouded in ambiguity, but the structure adds to its vague nature still remaining linear. I just hope for your sake, that 'Caprice' is merely imagery and not a reference to last months FHM.
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| Re: Adam by massakist666 |
24-Aug-02/7:40 AM |
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A cunning twist!!! You have marks for effort, unfortunately the content leaves a little to be desired and should probably have remained in the playground.
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| Re: Dignity by kthulah |
24-Aug-02/3:58 AM |
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I like this, its very human at face value. It answers a question that many are asked on a daily basis. - Thumbs up and top marks 10/10.
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