on Passion's Flashes by RaychelW
31 Aug 2002, 3:33 AM
Some spell binding imagery, I shall follow your work Rach.
on some deleted poem
24 Oct 2002, 7:46 AM
You make me sick!
on some deleted poem
31 Aug 2002, 3:27 AM
This is dreadful, i've wasted a whole 60 seconds of my life reading this tripe, it stinks, you certainly are not a poet.
on Passion's Flashes by RaychelW
31 Aug 2002, 3:33 AM
Some spell binding imagery, I shall follow your work Rach.
on Passion's Flashes by RaychelW
31 Aug 2002, 3:33 AM
Some spell binding imagery, I shall follow your work Rach.
on AIDS in a van by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
31 Aug 2002, 3:44 AM
you sick, sick man. Whats your fascination with the virus?
on spirit of a grama by livingcanvas
31 Aug 2002, 3:17 AM
I will most certainly follow your work after perusing this fragile little gem. Love the way you have controlled your emotions from verse to verse, each creating there own individual statements that are as bold as brass.
on The Stifling Moment by vulcan
31 Aug 2002, 3:06 AM
I agree with Mojo, an air of ambiguity leaves asking why do I find this seemingly morbid piece so enrapturing
on Love and Marriage in Da Nang by Tascobar
29 Aug 2002, 7:33 AM
THIS IS DRIBBLE!!!
on Out Doubt! by wlshepherd
24 Aug 2002, 7:44 AM
Shrouded in ambiguity, but the structure adds to its vague nature still remaining linear. I just hope for your sake, that 'Caprice' is merely imagery and not a reference to last months FHM.
on some deleted poem
24 Aug 2002, 3:58 AM
I like this, its very human at face value. It answers a question that many are asked on a daily basis. - Thumbs up and top marks 10/10.
on Adam by massakist666
24 Aug 2002, 7:40 AM
A cunning twist!!! You have marks for effort, unfortunately the content leaves a little to be desired and should probably have remained in the playground.
on Follow by unknown
24 Aug 2002, 7:50 AM
Reference to a 'retinal flare' is a particularly haunting image in this somewhat eerie piece. A very moving 1984esque style that snares the imagination. You have a fan Ant - 9/10.