Re: Dignity by kthulah	24-Aug-02/3:58 AM
I like this, its very human at face value. It answers a question that many are asked on a daily basis. - Thumbs up and top marks 10/10.
Re: Adam by massakist666	24-Aug-02/7:40 AM
A cunning twist!!! You have marks for effort, unfortunately the content leaves a little to be desired and should probably have remained in the playground.
Re: Out Doubt! by wlshepherd	24-Aug-02/7:44 AM
Shrouded in ambiguity, but the structure adds to its vague nature still remaining linear. I just hope for your sake, that 'Caprice' is merely imagery and not a reference to last months FHM.
Re: Follow by unknown	24-Aug-02/7:50 AM
Reference to a 'retinal flare' is a particularly haunting image in this somewhat eerie piece. A very moving 1984esque style that snares the imagination. You have a fan Ant - 9/10.
Re: Love and Marriage in Da Nang by Tascobar	29-Aug-02/7:33 AM
THIS IS DRIBBLE!!!
Re: The Stifling Moment by vulcan	31-Aug-02/3:06 AM
I agree with Mojo, an air of ambiguity leaves asking why do I find this seemingly morbid piece so enrapturing
Re: spirit of a grama by livingcanvas	31-Aug-02/3:17 AM
I will most certainly follow your work after perusing this fragile little gem. Love the way you have controlled your emotions from verse to verse, each creating there own individual statements that are as bold as brass.
regarding some deleted poem...	31-Aug-02/3:27 AM
This is dreadful, i've wasted a whole 60 seconds of my life reading this tripe, it stinks, you certainly are not a poet.
Re: Passion's Flashes by RaychelW	31-Aug-02/3:33 AM
Some spell binding imagery, I shall follow your work Rach.
Re: Passion's Flashes by RaychelW	31-Aug-02/3:33 AM
Some spell binding imagery, I shall follow your work Rach.
Re: Passion's Flashes by RaychelW	31-Aug-02/3:33 AM
Some spell binding imagery, I shall follow your work Rach.
Re: AIDS in a van by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.	31-Aug-02/3:44 AM
you sick, sick man. Whats your fascination with the virus?
regarding some deleted poem...	24-Oct-02/7:46 AM
You make me sick!