on Married by INTRANSIT
25 Sep 2002, 4:21 PM
These are truly the words of emotion expressed in "flow" with serene acceptance. Good job.
on Our New Tongue by Christof
25 Sep 2002, 1:23 PM
I perceive sadness and yet like your reference to "absurd" - very philosophical!
on glory bar realities by royalflesh
25 Sep 2002, 1:14 PM
Wow! I love how this "twists" my thoughts - very refreshing.
on Blind by shwenatjadeflower
27 Aug 2002, 2:10 PM
A little dull, but I liked the message nevertheless
on To You by Cha no Onna
9 May 2002, 4:39 AM
I'm not a great technical critic, but this poem pulls on the "heart strings"