on glory bar realities by royalflesh
25 Sep 2002, 1:14 PM
Wow! I love how this "twists" my thoughts - very refreshing.
on Our New Tongue by Christof
25 Sep 2002, 1:23 PM
I perceive sadness and yet like your reference to "absurd" - very philosophical!
on some deleted poem
12 Jul 2002, 4:12 PM
Really? Get your shit together bud, you don't know reality from suicide. Good for a laugh though!
on some deleted poem
12 Jul 2002, 4:14 PM
Given that I don't know what "shite" is, I can't except you as credible with your constructive criticism, but nice try anyway!
on To You by Cha no Onna
9 May 2002, 4:39 AM
I'm not a great technical critic, but this poem pulls on the "heart strings"
on some deleted poem
9 May 2002, 4:45 AM
Another soul passes under the bridge of grief onto the road of life - out of the "box" and onto the path - good luck
on some deleted poem
24 Mar 2002, 8:11 PM
It's a poem of such sadness and letting go.
on Blind by shwenatjadeflower
27 Aug 2002, 2:10 PM
A little dull, but I liked the message nevertheless