Re: Sexxodus by Shin-Bojangles	21-Aug-02/2:32 PM
Welcome, Gloria. Considering we have a wealth of nationalism, sexism, racism and numerous other isms all over this site, feminism will fit right in. Welcome.
Re: Awesome Heir by Shin-Bojangles	21-Aug-02/3:10 PM
And I am saying fucking welcome!!
Re: saving myself for marriage by Venus	22-Aug-02/3:06 PM
huh. This is an odd little ditty indeed. The last line confuses me. Tell me what you are saying because the haiku does not.
Re: saving myself for marriage by Venus	22-Aug-02/3:32 PM
Okay I get it. Sorry Dark Fuck, I do not have your superior skills of interpretation of allusions to the asshole. You must bend over and stare at that thing a lot considering a good deal of your thoughts, comments, and poems involve shit and its synonyms.
Re: Rainbow Tears by talking_goldfish	22-Aug-02/3:33 PM
Don't let anyone tell you this is a good poem. It is not a good poem. It is a bad, bad poem.
Re: saving myself for marriage by Venus	22-Aug-02/4:07 PM
Perhaps, DA, perhaps.
Re: Hey! Shut up, and cut my grass. by horus8	22-Aug-02/7:00 PM
Fuck, do you like burn calories when you write this stuff. It makes me sweat just reading it!
regarding some deleted poem...	22-Aug-02/7:05 PM
The entire philosophy of "show don't tell" comes into play here. You told me everything. It would be much more effective if you evoked better images.
Re: Dignity by kthulah	23-Aug-02/10:23 AM
Jesus, I fell like I am reading an interview with fucking Hester. Go change your clothes!
Re: Gilded Stumps of Olde (AN STORY THAT IS NOT AN POEME) by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.	23-Aug-02/3:10 PM
I think they are all over reacting. Because although you are the Joyce Carol Oates of fragmented poetic parody and this is the foundation of all your criticism (i.e. I am the verbal watchdog and I will cast you down with any debate and you cannot even say my poetry is shit because I write it to be shit therefore all of you arguments will send you spinning in a circular catch-22), it is not the fucking the "greatest story ever told" as your minions seem to think. It is a ditty and continues your legacy of shit. Better?
Re: Gilded Stumps of Olde (AN STORY THAT IS NOT AN POEME) by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.	23-Aug-02/3:25 PM
Shit as a metaphor, not a poem type. Sorry to mislead. the poem or not a poeme but story in this case is quite the amusing ditty.
Re: Hey! Shut up, and cut my grass. by horus8	23-Aug-02/3:28 PM
And here I thought this was a huge uni-tit woman decapitated by the alien controlled errant lawnmower blade, with an anorexic waste from eating the grass while the mower was in the shop and a skirt the would make Freud proud. I guess I was wrong.
Re: White Lie by ErgoErgun	23-Aug-02/8:55 PM
Wow, in the name if Frass I want to be constructive to this, but it is tough. There is not a lot to work with. It sounds like a rap, which is, well, maybe, could be, some form of poetry, right? But the real problem with the poem is that is is way, way to didactic. And that is not good preacher man.
Re: Losing A Friend by venusdemilo	23-Aug-02/8:57 PM
Call Hallmark!!! We have ourselves a gift writer of greeting card on this site. Read books not cards. (Sorry, Frass)
regarding some deleted poem...	23-Aug-02/9:06 PM
point of no return - is a Kansas song and as soon as I hit that line the song spun into play inside my head! Then comes the drama - the gates of hell guarded by the faithful evil fucking mutts, oh and then, and then the devil's bride....ooooh I squeal with delight. I give this. Well I usually don't vote, but in this case a 10!!!
Re: Hip Nos by kthulah	23-Aug-02/9:07 PM
There are actually a couple of good lines in here - a couple. Try to find them and start over. It is like a word puzzle - find the good lines in your own poem.
Re: Sacrosanct Oligarch by Frass	23-Aug-02/9:10 PM
Has its moments. Like marital lies petrify, but I think the poem lollygags in cutely designed rhythms. Ii guess I just like poetry with an edge. Something to smack me up side the head. But this just doesn't do it. And it is not funny.
Re: Losing A Friend by venusdemilo	23-Aug-02/9:15 PM
What you cannot come up with your own shit to say. Fuck it, if you can call it what it is then what the point. What are you, some fucked up Englishman who tries to save every trite fucking wannabes feeling. Tell them to get some fucking skin. If you want to show your poetry, send out your poetry, or let people read your poetry, then you better expect someone to come along and say it is shit. Quit being a wuss. If this poem were good, I would have said so. And what I said was constructive. She can get a job paying her 40K a year to write this shit.
Re: Losing A Friend by venusdemilo	23-Aug-02/9:25 PM
Fine Venusdemillo: I am sorry for the cliched use of Hallmark. Somebody call Ambassador....I don't think they pay as much and they are in Cleveland, but then again, Hallmark is in KC Misery. And I am not fired up. Sometimes I love hearing myself swear. It is like verbal yoga. Do Re Mi fa so la FUCK!!! See I feel better.
Re: Losing A Friend by venusdemilo	23-Aug-02/9:31 PM
Jesus, will you guys just get a room already.