regarding some deleted poem...	28-Aug-02/4:26 PM
What the fuck are you talking about?
regarding some deleted poem...	28-Aug-02/4:30 PM
Many of your dear friends committed suicide. I'd hate to speculate what that says about you.
regarding some deleted poem...	28-Aug-02/4:34 PM
Who's been giving you a hard time, Anagram? you are sweet and dear. Most Yanks (98%?) have no idea what MJ-12 means. This is a place of higher learning. There are no stupid questions.
regarding some deleted poem...	28-Aug-02/4:43 PM
Razorgrin-- I apologize for being a shithead. Please forgive. it's such a rowdy roust in here I came out swinging. i know what you mean. every man wearing a hat and reading a newspaper. I didn't know who was coming to get me first. The Man , or the Aliens.
regarding some deleted poem...	28-Aug-02/4:46 PM
Anagram- didn't mean to imply.
Re: Too far by heroditus	28-Aug-02/4:57 PM
I'm enjoying this intil --and choice cannot choose. --He knows that in choosing pain always wins. Is excellent. At this point a 4. Because you can do better.
regarding some deleted poem...	28-Aug-02/4:59 PM
Razor grin-- What did he look like?
Re: Comparisons by anagram	28-Aug-02/5:07 PM
On second look these semm like beginnings of sentences. If your still fond of this one maybe you could finish some of these sentences and what you make of it.
regarding some deleted poem...	28-Aug-02/5:14 PM
Rotten thing for a tot. They sense every little change in their parents' dispositions. Youu must have been horrified.
regarding some deleted poem...	28-Aug-02/5:17 PM
I'm off to make vittles for the childrens. See you in 2hrs.
Re: Comparisons by anagram	28-Aug-02/6:25 PM
But it's never good in the first place. Think of it. The first time you made love. Now compare that to what you're capable of now. I go through hell with my poems. Don't think I just toss those out. Some come easy like Monica, but I still have to sit with them and work them through. It's worth it.
Re: Until Then by Katie	28-Aug-02/6:41 PM
Night, bright, shore, more, land, sand, away, away, away. Katie, plain and simple.
regarding some deleted poem...	28-Aug-02/10:48 PM
Awful, gawdy and awful. Makes me think of cheap Tijuana Louis XIV furniture knock offs made of plywood, glue, and paint.
Re: To Dwell For Freedom by devotedwonder	28-Aug-02/10:49 PM
I didn't know convicts had access to the net.
regarding some deleted poem...	28-Aug-02/10:53 PM
I think you should stop gazing and concentrate on reading something of value.
Re: mine own battle: by Sapphire	28-Aug-02/10:58 PM
Fizz of fear? Really. Fizz of fear?
Re: Enslaved by Twisted Wizard	28-Aug-02/11:12 PM
There's a shot you can get for this, or you can take antibiotics for 10 days. the county clinic will treat you for free.
regarding some deleted poem...	29-Aug-02/8:59 AM
Cheers! Dr. Christof,that's fantastic! I'm sure you'll be making oodles of pounds (hey, theres no symbol for English currency on my keyboard!)now. Are you going to teach? Yes I like this poem. I did get lost in the 3rd stanza, don't know what a biro is, (a pen brand)and then it's all gladly and clouds and leaving books scattered. Why do the planes like pewits make you go? So tell me, you must know alot about this fellow, what do you like best about your Lord Thomas
Re: Petrarchan Sonnet about Love by emilyowey	29-Aug-02/9:13 AM
This isn't bad it does have a few things holding it back. you can get rid of the Ands altogether. Then you can expand the to've into to have. I enjoy the lines --we give ourselves away...---For love and I ... Personally I've never tried coing that whole abbaabb..thing so you get points for accomplishing that. I still think it could be better. 6
regarding some deleted poem...	29-Aug-02/9:19 AM
I can relate to that whole 'understanding my own confusion'. I know enough about biology and brains and hormones to explain why we have so much trouble getting on in this world. I know I've heard his name, but I don't think I've had the pleasure. I'll look him up at the library.