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Too far (Free verse) by heroditus
In going too far he travels the distance before
day breaking himself open on a haphazard blade
someone forgot to put away sells slices of skin I
am my own story he says but the grey of his
eyes in the city makes it difficult to see him mostly
except when he points to himself or others or
answers back or looks away and he knows that in
choosing pain always wins and choice cannot
choose itself so he settles on the edge of a large
rock throwing pieces of skin at the wind.
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Arithmetic Mean: 6.75
Weighted score: 5.4706473
Overall Rank: 2835
Posted: August 28, 2002 3:49 PM PDT; Last modified: August 28, 2002 3:49 PM PDT
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