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1-Jul-06/9:39 AM |
This is just a great allegory and nothing less, bravo *10*
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1-Jul-06/9:40 AM |
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1-Jul-06/9:42 AM |
AHAHAHA glorious! Well done, another *10*
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Re: Diary by Dovina |
31-Jul-06/12:57 PM |
Verisimilitude throws this off a bit, but I think it fits as a noticeable oddity. Really a good poem, overall.
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Re: Major by rahson_s |
31-Jul-06/12:59 PM |
I love L7. That makes the poem for me.
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31-Jul-06/1:01 PM |
It's not a matter of intellectual odds. This is just an average poem. I get it, it's just not that appealing to me.
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Re: Hot by Dovina |
31-Jul-06/1:04 PM |
Good message, maybe replace the second vice with something else. Love the rhythm, especially the first stanza.
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Re: you & you all congregators by A. Nomaly |
31-Jul-06/1:05 PM |
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Re: A Cripples Brittle Broken Bones by creepshow |
31-Jul-06/1:07 PM |
A bit too busy here. The tense changes are a little annoying. However, the last four lines are outstanding and the concept is good.
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Re: A Poem For George Bush by Edna Sweetlove |
31-Jul-06/1:09 PM |
Good rant. Good ol free speech.
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Re: fragment by ecargo |
31-Jul-06/1:12 PM |
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Re: Here's your God by Caducus |
2-Aug-06/8:40 PM |
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2-Aug-06/11:55 PM |
This is SO good, the voters should do this justice. It's fantastic.
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Re: flow-charts by FreeFormFixation |
12-Aug-06/1:00 AM |
Ha! "Flows" perfectly. A wonderful statement. Especially liked the last three lines. Kudos.
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Re: The Consultation by Edna Sweetlove |
14-Aug-06/12:13 AM |
Poetically, outstanding. Morally, disturbing. 11
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Re: I Got the Romanian Flea-Bitten Blues by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
14-Aug-06/12:14 AM |
Wow, this is gorgeous, especially the 2nd half. Noice.
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Re: Sarah Hine's Cries by rahson_s |
14-Aug-06/12:16 AM |
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Re: Something More by drnick |
14-Aug-06/12:17 AM |
An inordinate amount of people spell lose loose and i don't know why...however, not bad.
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14-Aug-06/12:18 AM |
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Re: Fragrant Love by Engelbert Humpalot |
14-Aug-06/12:20 AM |
Not one for actual storylines, but this was more than adequate...good one.
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