on featherlight hands by darkshark
10 Aug 2004, 9:59 PM
Great description, only thing I'm not sure about is the line breaks.
on A fish, or what's left of one by phbiscuit
10 Aug 2004, 9:57 PM
Nice, I've been playing around with a poem that has a similar theme to this. =-)
on Certain circles by INTRANSIT
9 Aug 2004, 9:43 AM
Loved this line: "The brother who breathes the color red from the gold filled barn to the American flag."
Very nice!
Very nice!
on Innocence by QuirkyWonder
2 Aug 2004, 8:56 PM
Lovely! Great visual poem! Way to paint a picture with words! =-)
on Harvester of Sorrow by frdup717
2 Aug 2004, 8:53 PM
Nice rhythm. If I may ask, is there a reason "lie" is not capitalized? Typo? Just curious.
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replying on Tribute to "The Cow" by eyrbare
26 Nov 2003, 5:30 PM
In response to Nicholas' comment. I used the word "variety" as in meaning "type," "assortment," "class," "family" etc. (I looked synonyms up on Dictionary.com).
I did not state that Jerseys and Gurnseys are the same breed of bolvine. I said that they are variety of cows. They both produce milk, so I thought that there might be a chance that their milk is used for yogurt. Besides, It's better than say....
Jerseys, Holsteins
are of the cow variety.
or
Brown Swiss, Gurenseys
are of the cow variety.
I hope this makes sense. And I'm sorry if that isn't the how you interpreted it, I guess I didn't make it clear. And I don't mean to sound bitchy or anything, probably think I'm a little longwinded, but I just wanted to make my point. Thanks for the comment!
I did not state that Jerseys and Gurnseys are the same breed of bolvine. I said that they are variety of cows. They both produce milk, so I thought that there might be a chance that their milk is used for yogurt. Besides, It's better than say....
Jerseys, Holsteins
are of the cow variety.
or
Brown Swiss, Gurenseys
are of the cow variety.
I hope this makes sense. And I'm sorry if that isn't the how you interpreted it, I guess I didn't make it clear. And I don't mean to sound bitchy or anything, probably think I'm a little longwinded, but I just wanted to make my point. Thanks for the comment!
replying on Lesson in Wickedness by eyrbare
22 Nov 2003, 8:25 AM
I thought of going to Z, but I quite like it the way it is. =) It would be a bit of a challenge trying to get it up to Z though...I'm always up for a challenge. =D
on The Mystery of My Bobble Headed Doll by CouchPotato
21 Nov 2003, 7:30 AM
Can visualize the scene very well. Good job! =D
on I don't like fish by INTRANSIT
18 Nov 2003, 8:05 PM
With the title, I was partly expecting a Dr. Seuss poem. Cute joke poem!
on She wishes by INTRANSIT
18 Nov 2003, 8:01 PM
Superb short (poem, that is)!
on Promises by blueiris1261
17 Nov 2003, 2:01 PM
Nice acrosstic (spell?) poem!