| Re: featherlight hands by darkshark |
10-Aug-04/9:59 PM |
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Great description, only thing I'm not sure about is the line breaks.
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| Re: A fish, or what's left of one by phbiscuit |
10-Aug-04/9:57 PM |
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Nice, I've been playing around with a poem that has a similar theme to this. =-)
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| Re: Certain circles by INTRANSIT |
9-Aug-04/9:43 AM |
Loved this line: "The brother who breathes the color red from the gold filled barn to the American flag."
Very nice!
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| Re: Summer by Dovina |
3-Aug-04/7:29 PM |
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Lovely poem, great image!
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| Re: Innocence by QuirkyWonder |
2-Aug-04/8:56 PM |
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Lovely! Great visual poem! Way to paint a picture with words! =-)
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| Re: Harvester of Sorrow by frdup717 |
2-Aug-04/8:53 PM |
Nice rhythm. If I may ask, is there a reason "lie" is not capitalized? Typo? Just curious.
=-)Â
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| Re: a comment on Tribute to "The Cow" by eyrbare |
26-Nov-03/5:30 PM |
In response to Nicholas' comment. I used the word "variety" as in meaning "type," "assortment," "class," "family" etc. (I looked synonyms up on Dictionary.com).
I did not state that Jerseys and Gurnseys are the same breed of bolvine. I said that they are variety of cows. They both produce milk, so I thought that there might be a chance that their milk is used for yogurt. Besides, It's better than say....
Jerseys, Holsteins
are of the cow variety.
or
Brown Swiss, Gurenseys
are of the cow variety.
I hope this makes sense. And I'm sorry if that isn't the how you interpreted it, I guess I didn't make it clear. And I don't mean to sound bitchy or anything, probably think I'm a little longwinded, but I just wanted to make my point. Thanks for the comment!
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| Re: a comment on Lesson in Wickedness by eyrbare |
22-Nov-03/8:25 AM |
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I thought of going to Z, but I quite like it the way it is. =) It would be a bit of a challenge trying to get it up to Z though...I'm always up for a challenge. =D
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| Re: The Mystery of My Bobble Headed Doll by CouchPotato |
21-Nov-03/7:30 AM |
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Can visualize the scene very well. Good job! =D
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| Re: Boxes by INTRANSIT |
18-Nov-03/8:27 PM |
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| Re: I don't like fish by INTRANSIT |
18-Nov-03/8:05 PM |
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With the title, I was partly expecting a Dr. Seuss poem. Cute joke poem!
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| Re: a comment on Truth by eyrbare |
18-Nov-03/8:02 PM |
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Thanks a bunch! Especially great to here comments from a fellow UWer. My website is a continous project; it shall never be completely finished. But I hope to be adding more of my work(s) later. =)
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| Re: She wishes by INTRANSIT |
18-Nov-03/8:01 PM |
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Superb short (poem, that is)!
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| Re: a comment on Truth by eyrbare |
17-Nov-03/8:31 PM |
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Thanks for the great comment!
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| Re: Promises by blueiris1261 |
17-Nov-03/2:01 PM |
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Nice acrosstic (spell?) poem!
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