Re: Promises by blueiris1261	17-Nov-03/2:01 PM
Nice acrosstic (spell?) poem!
regarding some deleted poem...	17-Nov-03/2:04 PM
Very nice; can picture the scene well.
Re: She wishes by INTRANSIT	18-Nov-03/8:01 PM
Superb short (poem, that is)!
Re: I don't like fish by INTRANSIT	18-Nov-03/8:05 PM
With the title, I was partly expecting a Dr. Seuss poem. Cute joke poem!
Re: Boxes by INTRANSIT	18-Nov-03/8:27 PM
Great! X
Re: The Mystery of My Bobble Headed Doll by CouchPotato	21-Nov-03/7:30 AM
Can visualize the scene very well. Good job! =D
Re: Harvester of Sorrow by frdup717	2-Aug-04/8:53 PM
Nice rhythm. If I may ask, is there a reason "lie" is not capitalized? Typo? Just curious. =-)Â
Re: Innocence by QuirkyWonder	2-Aug-04/8:56 PM
Lovely! Great visual poem! Way to paint a picture with words! =-)
Re: Summer by Dovina	3-Aug-04/7:29 PM
Lovely poem, great image!
regarding some deleted poem...	3-Aug-04/7:54 PM
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Re: Certain circles by INTRANSIT	9-Aug-04/9:43 AM
Loved this line: "The brother who breathes the color red from the gold filled barn to the American flag." Very nice!
Re: A fish, or what's left of one by phbiscuit	10-Aug-04/9:57 PM
Nice, I've been playing around with a poem that has a similar theme to this. =-)
Re: featherlight hands by darkshark	10-Aug-04/9:59 PM
Great description, only thing I'm not sure about is the line breaks.