regarding some deleted poem...	23-Dec-03/9:19 AM
Excellent sonnet. A whimsical sadness. I give it a 9
Re: the gods of rook and man by richa	23-Dec-03/2:10 PM
I think this is beautiful - but, some of the line splits through me a little and I had to read them a few times - tighten it a bit and it will be perfect. I give you a 9 - 10 when it's revamped. Send this out - it's worthy....
Re: Faith by Pervy Elf	30-Dec-03/10:25 AM
the bashing of religion on this site just amazes me... first of all - it is not God who causes children to be molested, young people to die or any other evil that goes on in this world - man allows his faith to be so weak that evil seeps in and takes control. You wonder where God was - He was holding your ungrateful, weak, faithless ass up, not allowing evil to take that final step of control.
regarding some deleted poem...	15-Jan-04/1:42 PM
some of the rhyming threw me a little. Intriguing - sounds like a bigger story is left unsaid.
regarding some deleted poem...	26-Jan-04/8:02 AM
excellent tone. Insomnia blows. A definate 9
regarding some deleted poem...	17-Feb-04/6:48 AM
wow! I think you've both left me speachless - my thanks.
Re: Timmy by richa	3-Mar-04/9:38 AM
A very haunting quality. I thought the last line should have just a bit more - but that's just me. Excellent read otherwise.
regarding some deleted poem...	4-Mar-04/12:13 PM
This is excellent - kudos to you. But, I like it as it is - all those semi-colons are annoying and take away from the simple beauty and soft voice of the poem.
regarding some deleted poem...	18-Mar-04/1:05 PM
This was great - very amusing, entertaining and well written. And the banter of replies - you guys kill me....
regarding some deleted poem...	31-Mar-04/12:51 PM
skittles - ooh.. meant it as catching breakfast - as in trout - not .... that. Will definately give the end some consideration for change. Thanks for the 8.
regarding some deleted poem...	7-May-04/10:08 AM
thanks hypatia - will definately consider suggestions.
Re: The Ballad of Fraser Allonby Q.C., Barrister-At-Law by wFraser Allonby Q.C.w	14-May-04/9:49 AM
that was great! thoroughly enjoyable.. I dub thee with a 9
regarding some deleted poem...	27-May-04/12:34 PM
harsh... be sure to add your encouragement and critique to some of the others who have missed your insightfulness..
regarding some deleted poem...	2-Jun-04/12:25 PM
the mind is in the gutter and the title is just killing me.... overall - felt like the beginning of a story - wanted to read on but, alas, there was no more..
Re: Dear Lord, by INTRANSIT	2-Jun-04/12:27 PM
I liked the just on the edge of dark, old romantic feel of this.
regarding some deleted poem...	16-Jun-04/7:50 AM
A little venting going on? I liked it though. I bless you with an honest 8.
regarding some deleted poem...	18-Jun-04/6:59 AM
very wise - liked this one!
Re: afraid by hbhpoems	30-Jun-04/11:54 AM
I'm afraid I have to agree with the others - a tale with no expression... A shrink is an amazing use of money and really can help with your issues.
Re: Lord Byron Gave Mary Her Shelly by horus8	3-Sep-04/7:09 AM
I like the intensity to this piece - it's darkness. I made me want to keep reading until the end.
regarding some deleted poem...	10-Nov-04/2:44 PM
I try not to say anything disparaging - but you're a much better writer than this - this made me think you were 12 - or younger. My 9 year old niece writes better than this piece.