Re: My Office by Tascobar	4-Sep-02/11:45 AM
Everyone scratches themselves at work. If we didn't we'd have to do something like type. She won't think you've got crabs. Hopefully. I lilke the triotic curve you give it with the last two lines. Wonderful work.
Re: The Sea by Tarquin De La Bog	17-Aug-02/1:30 PM
You lot all need to wank more instead of taking out your frustration on a poetry website. Sheesh. Take it for what it is - simple fun. Nice one Tarquin.
Re: The War by Tarquin De La Bog	17-Aug-02/1:27 PM
Takes me back to a walk down a Paris canal in 1943. So it must be good. If this doesn't make the top ten nothing will. Keep it up. The Sinner.
Re: Dirty Pops by Tarquin De La Bog	17-Aug-02/1:24 PM
Tarquin, I must say, your work reminds me of the late 60's poet Mr J Reeve - both VERY classy.
Re: grope by Mister Cakes	6-Aug-02/5:22 AM
So true, so DAMM true. Fucking taunting us - 24-7. Capturing us in their icy glares.
Re: Jim Shady. by The troubled sinner	30-Jul-02/5:29 AM
I don't have enough time to tell you my sins from the last day - never mind any longer. I am truly a sinner.
Re: Seasonal Memories by ErgoErgun	29-Jul-02/5:45 AM
Not sure about your structure? it could do with some editing but otherwise a decent effort. Keep trying.
Re: The train by Art Glocken	29-Jul-02/5:41 AM
The work of My Glocken never fails to disappoint me. Such a talent - wasted. Reminisent of gazza
Re: Painting by Art Glocken	29-Jul-02/5:40 AM
The work of My Glocken never fails to disappoint me. Such a talent - wasted. Reminisent of gazza
Re: Arts stare by Art Glocken	29-Jul-02/5:40 AM
The work of My Glocken never fails to disappoint me. Such a talent - wasted. Reminisent of gazza.
Re: The Poison by TheTiredTyrant	29-Jul-02/5:35 AM
This poem perfetly summarises what is wrong with the people of my city. Sheffield. Amazing. I feel like the mice.