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12-Sep-03/3:00 PM |
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I couldn't read it all. But from what I saw of it I'll give you an 8. Some great thoughts and views in what I did read.
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| Re: Lifestyles of the ripe and glamourless by horus8 |
12-Sep-03/3:07 PM |
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It almost seems to be more of a rant. But it works, and some of the things are so off the wall. I love it.
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| Re: Slimshady Meets Cali Hillbilly (I Don An Afro) by SupremeDreamer |
13-Sep-03/1:20 AM |
It was a fun read man. Looks like you had to have had a blast writing it. One of those that you sat there forever to write? Little by little, reading over, changing. Looking at the screen cockeyed wondering if it makes any sense.
Being messed up helps you write at times doesn't it?
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| Re: Slimshady Meets Cali Hillbilly (I Don An Afro) by SupremeDreamer |
13-Sep-03/1:20 AM |
It was a fun read man. Looks like you had to have had a blast writing it. One of those that you sat there forever to write? Little by little, reading over, changing. Looking at the screen cockeyed wondering if it makes any sense.
Being messed up helps you write at times doesn't it?
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13-Sep-03/2:18 AM |
Great poem man. I found out only a year or two after being out and it kicked my ass.
She was long gone off to college so whats one to do. I don't think I'd stand a chance now. Its been a long time since we've last seen one another. Likely turned into what most college girls do anymore, not saying all sexual. Just not her almost innocent self.
I'm giving you a 10.
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| Re: Angelic Fornication by The_Third_Isis |
13-Sep-03/4:39 PM |
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Very nice. It says a lot but drags or something at the end. Maybe take out the last two lines? Here's a 9 none the less.
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| Re: The Gentleman by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
13-Sep-03/4:53 PM |
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Nice poem it says just what you want it to say after reading a few comments. Quite well put together I saw the picture come together and give the meaning. Here's a 10.
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| Re: playing the scratching game by nentwined |
15-Sep-03/3:38 AM |
Way to reach out for attention.
Says exactally what you want it to. Short and to the point. I'm liking it, here's a ten.
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| Re: playing the scratching game by nentwined |
15-Sep-03/3:39 AM |
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Oh yeah I see a little kid waving his arms around in a temper trantrum like in the store. Hehe love it.
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| Re: this is your poetry by nentwined |
23-Sep-03/1:42 AM |
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| Re: The Poem Without an End Working Towards the Beginning by TheVoiceless |
30-Sep-03/12:36 PM |
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How might I ask did this piece of shit get a ten?
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