Re: 'Where I come from- S.M.C!!' by Hostileintent |
14-Aug-03/3:47 PM |
just out of school,so i think i understand it well.like where you are going with it, esp about the 'killing individuality with art bit'.mother is irish,she translated.rhyme is good. 8
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Re: Memory by Hostileintent |
14-Aug-03/3:49 PM |
i like your poetry in general.it appeals to me, i suppose i can say we are in the same boat. the last three stanzas are really powerful. 9
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Re: Incomplete by Hostileintent |
14-Aug-03/3:52 PM |
have i seen this one before? i'm dead sure i have. poetry.com? yea,when i saw it there,i thought some of it was pretty wierd,and hard to understand.but i get the main parts.that line 'and precarious fob eachother off as' , is that two parts back to front?either way, nice piece of work.hard.but nice
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Re: Rearview mirrors by horus8 |
15-Aug-03/1:02 PM |
ha ha aha
you have a bad head.
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Re: Rearview mirrors by horus8 |
15-Aug-03/1:03 PM |
wow your poems are really good.
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Re: Rearview mirrors by horus8 |
15-Aug-03/1:05 PM |
good old horus eight
he has anal sex with his mate
once his friend is at the end
good old homo just says 'bend'
my friend horus eight
loves to masturbate
he spends his day, lookin gay
wating to fuck his mate
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Re: Rearview mirrors by horus8 |
15-Aug-03/2:12 PM |
Humpty Dumpty sat on a wall, taking head from his best friend Horus
Humpty Dumpty fell off the wall, onto the bed of this stud Horus
Humpty Dumpty was not on top,to that job he left two inch Horus
Humpty Dumpty wanted more, he was not satisfied
Humpty Dumpty was adament, he wanted a larger cock inside
Good old Horus, homo Horus, homo Horus cried
He cried all day, he wanked all night
He wanked until his dick was red and white
A year to the day, since Horus cried
It was to me that Homo Horus did confide
'I'm so pissed off, I want a cock
that's 18 long and 18 wide
I want the lads to fear the cock,
And say that I Horus, truly, am, the best ride'
I'm sorry Horus, I had to say,
Unlike you, I'm not gay
In my opinion, it would work the best
If you killed yourself, you fucking pest!
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Re: for sue (20030815) by nentwined |
15-Aug-03/2:24 PM |
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Re: A look at Horus8 by Sir.Psycho.Sexy |
15-Aug-03/2:25 PM |
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Re: The truth about our friend Horus by Sir.Psycho.Sexy |
15-Aug-03/2:26 PM |
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Re: The truth about our friend Horus by Sir.Psycho.Sexy |
15-Aug-03/2:37 PM |
damn straight sliver.although, i doubt he'd be able to penetrate
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regarding some deleted poem... |
15-Aug-03/2:40 PM |
pretty strange,but cool all the same.have a look at mine 7
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Re: I Love You by jude |
15-Aug-03/2:43 PM |
we all know the feeling
have a look at mine
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Re: Fuck Me Like Love Fucks Me (changed) by Son Of A Bitch |
15-Aug-03/2:45 PM |
FUCKING LOVE IT.LOVE IT!!
what about horus,look at mine
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regarding some deleted poem... |
15-Aug-03/2:47 PM |
cool!
have a look at horus,mine
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Re: A look at Horus8 by Sir.Psycho.Sexy |
15-Aug-03/2:57 PM |
oh it's war all right.this guy's up his own arse.just vote a ten,to piss the cunt off
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Re: Stone Slave by DreamerSupreme |
15-Aug-03/2:59 PM |
vote a ten to piss him off.that aside,i like your stuff,
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Re: A look at Horus8 by Sir.Psycho.Sexy |
15-Aug-03/3:02 PM |
it's a pity he's gay,because i'd say you'd like to suck him bad
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Re: Sir Psycho Sexy by DreamerSupreme |
16-Aug-03/2:47 PM |
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Re: Sir Psycho Sexy by DreamerSupreme |
16-Aug-03/2:51 PM |
i'm guessing it's you riding horus, up the bum
i can hear him panting, for you to cum
'supreme dreamer, as hard as you can
you're the daddy, so fuck like a man'
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