| Re: Troublemaker by Patsy |
31-Aug-03/7:15 AM |
this, as a whole, eclipses most else i've read of yours.
an aura of...tenderness, perhaps?
i've forgotten the exact word, at the moment, but inverted paternalism is what i'm trying to get to.
many more questions, though: is it based on a specific person? the..err..rest of the questions will have to wait till later, because i must zoomph into offline mode.
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again, thank you.
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| Re: a comment on trying to cross the border to Sweetgrass by Patsy |
22-Aug-03/11:18 AM |
there aren't enough rants in the world.
or rather, there are too many, but not enough about the things that matter.
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| Re: The Well by Caducus |
13-Aug-03/10:04 PM |
Great. More elaboration on the last four lines, perhaps, might have added something still more?
Just a thought.
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| Re: (The vinyards of Tuscany) by Patsy |
13-Aug-03/3:03 PM |
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| Re: trying to cross the border to Sweetgrass by Patsy |
13-Aug-03/3:02 PM |
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the first half, especially, resonates.
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| Re: why am i still thinking about blood? by Patsy |
13-Aug-03/2:57 PM |
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hrm. for some reason, i liked "unburden" much better. the last line is more *you*, i think, than most of the rest.
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| Re: (getting used to spending too much time with myself) by Patsy |
13-Aug-03/2:53 PM |
Very ... now? present? here? not quite sure *what*, exactly, but it's there. In general, alive.
no "pretenses", at any rate.
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