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why am i still thinking about blood? (Free verse) by Patsy
The more i stand here
bleeding
the bigger the picture.
i feel as the egg to the vessel is
and waiting, i'm waiting
sheltered,
they the virility,
they the man-chores
i don't like this feeling.
i know longer
i no longer know
if i see the forest for the trees
or if i forgot what a tree was.
Am i the (wo)man who mistook his wife for a hat?
i see the fresh PALM Pilots dashed whole
from the Rock, i
try not to look
where they pile up.
We have a heavy continent, kids.
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Weighted score: 5.0476813
Overall Rank: 6863
Posted: August 13, 2003 5:35 AM PDT; Last modified: August 13, 2003 5:35 AM PDT
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