| Re: How To Make Up Without Saying I'm Sorry by OnTheOtherHand |
11-Jul-03/1:34 AM |
This is rubbish. I think you should rewrite the first stanza as follows:
I could still convince myself to be gay
I could make myself if I wanted to
But you'll have to get out of my way
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| Re: On A Night Like This by bazz |
11-Jul-03/1:36 AM |
RUBBISH
She was a dirty whore anyway, and she cheated on you twice without you ever knowing.
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| Re: Nothing you can say by Rodavlas |
11-Jul-03/1:38 AM |
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I'm going to make you eat your poems so that you can discover what shit tastes like.
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11-Jul-03/1:41 AM |
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This is an excellent poem. Thank you, Mr Forsaken, for writing such a beautiful and delicate work of genius.
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11-Jul-03/1:43 AM |
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Any chance of a pro-fascist re-write?
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| Re: OK, I apologize - it's steaming shite and no mistake, but it was the best I could come up with on the spur of the moment. I'm off to slit my wrists now, since writer's block has sent me spiralling into the depths of the deepest depression in human history... by Yardbird |
11-Jul-03/2:48 AM |
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Get out of the Top Twenty and stay out!
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| Re: A load of bollocks - literally!!! by Yardbird |
11-Jul-03/2:49 AM |
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14-Jul-03/7:38 AM |
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This is really good! Two out of ten!
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14-Jul-03/7:41 AM |
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GGGGGGGGGGAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRRRBBBBBBBBBAAAAAAAAGGGGGGGGEEEEEEEE
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| Re: Memoirs of a Monk - St. Screamer by SupremeDreamer |
17-Jul-03/3:31 AM |
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Very good. You are making huge strides forward. Keep up the good work. 10
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4-Sep-03/1:38 AM |
BRILLIANT
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BRILLIANT
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4-Sep-03/1:39 AM |
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4-Sep-03/1:41 AM |
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ha ha ha hahhhhhhhgggggGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!
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14-Oct-03/7:01 AM |
I put your poem through Babel Fish a few times.
I hope that you are as pleased with the result as I am!!!
The thoughts receive the weapon have loaded it
Within the night.
Game, like conteggio of the ewes,
Russian of roulette;
If he is rotated the field,
You compress the excursion slowly,
To the launching.
If he is rotated the field,
Tou compress the excursion,
To the launching.
To the spider of the times I
Pressures join in order to send,
Acceleration of the return,
Pressing in order to send itself,
Until the left warning.
That anchor to resound scared with the dead women.
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| Re: For M. B. by Tits |
15-Oct-03/8:40 AM |
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16-Oct-03/5:06 AM |
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| Re: Autumn At All Saints Church by Caducus |
23-Oct-03/6:34 AM |
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| Re: http://www.aljazeera.net by Wobble McFly |
23-Oct-03/6:43 AM |
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| Re: falling in with the wrong crowd. by richa |
23-Oct-03/6:44 AM |
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| Re: The Brigadier's Motto by wFraser Allonby Q.C.w |
23-Apr-04/9:43 AM |
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