poemranker ::20 most recent comments by King Abdullah I

Comments byKing Abdullah I, the 20 most recent. Include replies

on some deleted poem 14 Oct 2003, 7:01 AM
I put your poem through Babel Fish a few times.

I hope that you are as pleased with the result as I am!!!





The thoughts receive the weapon have loaded it
Within the night.

Game, like conteggio of the ewes,
Russian of roulette;

If he is rotated the field,
You compress the excursion slowly,
To the launching.

If he is rotated the field,
Tou compress the excursion,
To the launching.

To the spider of the times I
Pressures join in order to send,
Acceleration of the return,
Pressing in order to send itself,
Until the left warning.

That anchor to resound scared with the dead women.
on For M. B. by Tits 15 Oct 2003, 8:40 AM
Excellent. -10-
on some deleted poem 16 Oct 2003, 5:06 AM
Splendid. -10-
on OK, I apologize - it's steaming shite and no mistake, but it was the best I could come up with on the spur of the moment. I'm off to slit my wrists now, since writer's block has sent me spiralling into the depths of the deepest depression in human history... by Yardbird 11 Jul 2003, 2:48 AM
Get out of the Top Twenty and stay out!
on some deleted poem 4 Sep 2003, 1:39 AM
POOPY
on some deleted poem 14 Jul 2003, 7:38 AM
This is really good! Two out of ten!
on some deleted poem 4 Sep 2003, 1:41 AM
ha ha ha hahhhhhhhgggggGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!
on Memoirs of a Monk - St. Screamer by SupremeDreamer 17 Jul 2003, 3:31 AM
Very good. You are making huge strides forward. Keep up the good work. 10
on some deleted poem 14 Jul 2003, 7:41 AM
GGGGGGGGGGAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRRRBBBBBBBBBAAAAAAAAGGGGGGGGEEEEEEEE
on some deleted poem 11 Jul 2003, 1:41 AM
This is an excellent poem. Thank you, Mr Forsaken, for writing such a beautiful and delicate work of genius.
on How To Make Up Without Saying I'm Sorry by OnTheOtherHand 11 Jul 2003, 1:34 AM
This is rubbish. I think you should rewrite the first stanza as follows:

I could still convince myself to be gay
I could make myself if I wanted to
But you'll have to get out of my way
on On A Night Like This by bazz 11 Jul 2003, 1:36 AM
RUBBISH

She was a dirty whore anyway, and she cheated on you twice without you ever knowing.
on Nothing you can say by Rodavlas 11 Jul 2003, 1:38 AM
I'm going to make you eat your poems so that you can discover what shit tastes like.
on A load of bollocks - literally!!! by Yardbird 11 Jul 2003, 2:49 AM
Very
on some deleted poem 11 Jul 2003, 1:43 AM
Any chance of a pro-fascist re-write?
on some deleted poem 4 Sep 2003, 1:38 AM
BRILLIANT
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on Autumn At All Saints Church by Caducus 23 Oct 2003, 6:34 AM
WOW!!!!!11
MEDIOCRITY CODE
00801400

http://www.mycgiserver.com/~prawne/code.jsp?action=decode&thecode=00801400

INSUFFICIENTLY MEDIOCRE

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on http://www.aljazeera.net by Wobble McFly 23 Oct 2003, 6:43 AM
WOW!!!!!11
MEDIOCRITY CODE
80FC7D69

http://www.mycgiserver.com/~prawne/code.jsp?action=decode&thecode=80FC7D69


on falling in with the wrong crowd. by richa 23 Oct 2003, 6:44 AM
-good-

on The Brigadier's Motto by wFraser Allonby Q.C.w 23 Apr 2004, 9:43 AM
http://www.landoverbaptist.org/news0104/ps2.html