on "The Zebra's Hoofbeats" by Lenore
17 Apr 2018, 11:05 PM
I like your word play. The beginning was great... Then it got a lil tedious. I can tell the ending was an attempt to fit in with your title... Title comes last, don't be constricted by it. Six, but you got a ten in there.
on And on and on and on by nentwined
17 Apr 2018, 10:58 PM
Hmm.
on Life in the Z-Zone by T. Jonathron Remp
17 Apr 2018, 10:56 PM
/me farts.
on that time i asked about dying by nypoet22
17 Apr 2018, 10:53 PM
Wtf is a tashlich mofo? I give it six. It's got more potential though.
replying on What Bitches? Oh yeah, I'll be talkin major shit. by SupremeDreamer
16 Jan 2017, 3:26 PM
Ineloquent you mean? Stupid cunt.
:)
:)
replying on Hobo. by SupremeDreamer
9 Apr 2015, 4:21 PM
Ah, I see you're a wee bit butt-hurt, aye? :D Life itself is fucking vulgar you cunt-rag.
on SUCH IS THE LOSS I FEEL by ARTIE
7 Apr 2015, 5:53 PM
Cliché, yeah, near pimple status? Oh... none of us want to know what parody i'd make of this... too fuckin easy, aye. Do you wish me to judge thy heart,
or thy ART? This poem.. I give a four, so that thy heart might not sour. :)
or thy ART? This poem.. I give a four, so that thy heart might not sour. :)
on There Was Poetry For Them All by nentwined
7 Apr 2015, 5:49 PM
Aye... and amen to tbe muse we all love to abuse.
on The Last Time by EAger to Offend
12 Jan 2014, 4:45 PM
Indeed.
replying on The Last Time by EAger to Offend
12 Jan 2014, 4:44 PM
Bah shut your face fool.
replying on A hangman's moaning by Moauram
4 Apr 2013, 4:07 PM
OI! Looks like someone's a wee bit upset! :D
You should have been about here long enough to have gotten used to my crudeness. Dovi, baby, quit bitching and toughen up already!
You should have been about here long enough to have gotten used to my crudeness. Dovi, baby, quit bitching and toughen up already!
on A hangman's moaning by Moauram
27 Mar 2013, 8:26 PM
Oh, or the crazy mofo that kills you and opens your skull!
on A hangman's moaning by Moauram
27 Mar 2013, 8:25 PM
It is the TOOL that suffers, fool. Not he who utilizes it. Ever seen the pen/pencil run out? Yeah, that's you.
And no, no one can see your mind except the asshole at the morgue. Till then "one must speak his/her mind."
You speak it like crap. The final stare of darkness would make a mind brittle... yet you're still alive.
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2.
And no, no one can see your mind except the asshole at the morgue. Till then "one must speak his/her mind."
You speak it like crap. The final stare of darkness would make a mind brittle... yet you're still alive.
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2.
on wall flower by Freethinker1602
27 Mar 2013, 8:18 PM
Ahh... this is ripe for greatness. The theme resonates, yet you didn't exectute it in the best manner.
Speak of the dances that come BEFORE your yearning for the last. Speak of that which inspired you to bother dancing in the first place... And PLEASE let it not be teenaged weariness for fuck sakes. ;/ List them as they come and have them evolve to an acceptance of death. We all grow weary, and all of us shall dance the last dance with sweet lady death, but the life that leads to that is what defines ones' contentedness
with death and the last dance.
Bring in the details! IMAGINE!
5.
Speak of the dances that come BEFORE your yearning for the last. Speak of that which inspired you to bother dancing in the first place... And PLEASE let it not be teenaged weariness for fuck sakes. ;/ List them as they come and have them evolve to an acceptance of death. We all grow weary, and all of us shall dance the last dance with sweet lady death, but the life that leads to that is what defines ones' contentedness
with death and the last dance.
Bring in the details! IMAGINE!
5.
on what is poetry 101 by Skamper
27 Mar 2013, 8:08 PM
You know why you're so mad? Because I didn't declare it the greatest piece I've ever read... What is poetry? You thought to express that in a senryu/haiku? Mr. Haiku would punch you in the face. Honestly, he would. In my hey-day? I'd have awarded you with a fucking zero. Don't get all defensive and BUTT-HURT!!!
Oh shit, did the yelling upset you? ... Fucking asshat. Be thankful this isn't face to face... I'd let you know what yelling sounds like. :D
Oh shit, did the yelling upset you? ... Fucking asshat. Be thankful this isn't face to face... I'd let you know what yelling sounds like. :D
replying on what is poetry 101 by Skamper
27 Mar 2013, 8:01 PM
BTW.. Just take notice that no one else bothered to respond to this crap... I'm the only one who genuinely thought to give a fuck, vote, and voice my UNIQUE opinion. Everyone responded with?... Silence. Biatch! How do you like that one? Eh? Also, text doesn't shout, even in capitals, unless your brain processes it so. :X GEN-U-WHINE. Now skamper along, punk.
replying on what is poetry 101 by Skamper
27 Mar 2013, 7:55 PM
Genuine? So are you insinuating that someone other than I came up with this thought? ... O.K. retard. I must be a puppet then? Right...!!!!
on Pandora's Box by Edna Sweetlove
27 Mar 2013, 7:53 PM
Must have had a really good camera to do that... does the follow up poem of this include the spread of STDs?