| Re: Birth in the Valley of Liquor by horus8 |
17-Jul-02/6:40 AM |
ah, but do you know how flammable i can get....especially in high gear at my well-programmed best?
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| Re: THE DEFENSE RESTS by horus8 |
17-Jul-02/7:03 AM |
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left-in-the-lurch loquatious leo vs. leaving lesbian lawyer...a jaunty little tale
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| Re: Sea Struck by Jsylum |
17-Jul-02/7:04 AM |
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rock me in the cradle of this soft sursurrant sea
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| Re: Beauty, Beware by Jsylum |
17-Jul-02/7:06 AM |
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i like the first 2 stanzas, but the 3rd leaves me unsatisfied
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| Re: she wonders, by <~> |
17-Jul-02/7:15 AM |
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exactly the effect i was hoping for...
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
17-Jul-02/7:18 AM |
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succint. poignant. moving. (ahem)
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| Re: wednesday night after church by unknown |
18-Jul-02/12:47 PM |
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| Re: Wounded by RobinGayle |
22-Jul-02/9:18 AM |
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how many times does will you take it, as a woman, before the healing begins?
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| Re: Jericho by goldfish |
25-Jul-02/11:24 AM |
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'ages are such fickle things'...'marble never lives'...two of my favorite pieces of a well-crafted and rhythmic treat. nice.
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26-Jul-02/6:53 AM |
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frankly, i'm surpised that there's room for poetry in that eency weency world view of yours. oh, and i find it amusing that you speak of protecting 'queers' and bending to his rod, all in the same poem...
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| Re: Ode to Bad poetry by unknown |
26-Jul-02/6:54 AM |
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so, what do you care about?
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26-Jul-02/7:25 AM |
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i like it. passion being the breath of life
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
26-Jul-02/7:27 AM |
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wow. lucid. dead on. Dark Angel for mayor.
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| Re: I Hate You by mytenderrage |
30-Jul-02/7:28 AM |
so, you got dumped. you wrote this to help process the pain. very constructive. maybe your therapist would have been a more receptive audience than the crowd here?
last time i checked, poetry utilized metaphor to express ideas.
maybe he dumped you because you have no imagination???
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| Re: I Hate You by mytenderrage |
30-Jul-02/9:14 AM |
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stain upon my screen / her emotions manifest, / scathe my jellied orbs.
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| Re: Hip Nos by kthulah |
30-Jul-02/9:19 AM |
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ooh. ooh. ah. nice meter. nice alliteration. nice mood. "it's the sharp in shards of a gem" sharp poem.
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| Re: The Nude by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
31-Jul-02/6:39 AM |
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i'm ALWAYS nude. it makes the day go smoothe. ly. um. er. mmm. -=Dark_Angel=-, keep churning em out. keep reminding us of our *essential* baseness. keep your dart gun pointed at ignorants. [sic] p.s. who holds the key to unlock your nudity?
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| Re: HOW DO I WRITE by kawakurdi |
31-Jul-02/6:50 AM |
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i like the idea very much, but i think the final stanza loses steam a bit. it's more...vernacular, maybe, than the images you paint in the rest of the poem
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