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Wounded

by RobinGayle

Member since 2002 · Posted 18 Jul 2002 · 2 comments

When I was young and stubbed my toe, While waiting for new skin, I'd stub it six more times before The healing would begin. A woman now, a deeper wound. I pray for thicker skin. 'Cause every time you step on me, I bite my tongue again.

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[8] nentwined 18-Jul-02/9:33 PM Reply
simple but perfect.
[7] <~> 22-Jul-02/9:18 AM Reply
how many times does will you take it, as a woman, before the healing begins?