on pavement by faded
8 Oct 2002, 10:15 PM
Loved it, i hope you are all right now.
on AIDS Bonanza! by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
8 Oct 2002, 10:13 PM
strange. i didn't enjoy this much.
on Mommy, why does -=DarkAngel=- use 'an' so much? by <{Baba^Yaga}>
8 Oct 2002, 10:10 PM
That gave me a chuckle.
on Mean Matt was so mean, when a homeless guy asked him for change he gave him a -blank- by beakism
8 Oct 2002, 10:04 PM
Angry?
on Frayed Edges by ShellBell7799
8 Oct 2002, 10:02 PM
Very well done. Very nicely portreyed. Imagery that sticks with you.
on IMMIGRATION by ali
3 Oct 2002, 9:51 PM
nice pace
on Baby Steps by SpiffyDoo
3 Oct 2002, 9:49 PM
Anticipation, experience.
on I Wish by liljsmith87
3 Oct 2002, 9:41 PM
I don't know too much about poetry, i am still quiet young in the scheme of things, but this is a nice daydream, reality does play a part. A road we all must eventually face. It's still nice to dream though. Sorry about the score, but you didn't have any use of real form in your writing, just content. We all learn as we grow.
ps- hope you find your girl.
ps- hope you find your girl.