poemranker ::20 most recent comments by Service and replies

Comments byService, the 20 most recent, including replies. Only comments on poems

on pavement by faded 8 Oct 2002, 10:15 PM
Loved it, i hope you are all right now.
on AIDS Bonanza! by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 8 Oct 2002, 10:13 PM
strange. i didn't enjoy this much.
That gave me a chuckle.
on Frayed Edges by ShellBell7799 8 Oct 2002, 10:02 PM
Very well done. Very nicely portreyed. Imagery that sticks with you.
on The Mill by vulcan 3 Oct 2002, 9:57 PM
The vulcan... an alien who supresses his/her emotions to allow logic to prevail unhindered.
excellent poem.
on Shadows by darren67 3 Oct 2002, 9:54 PM
I can relate completely to your theme. Read my poem "human self pity" see if you like it. At least you are aware of the "unreal" things in your life.
on IMMIGRATION by ali 3 Oct 2002, 9:51 PM
nice pace
on Baby Steps by SpiffyDoo 3 Oct 2002, 9:49 PM
Anticipation, experience.
on Gutless by temptalia 3 Oct 2002, 9:47 PM
Very raw, i get the picture. That is the mark of a poet after all isn't it?
on #17 by mikejedw 3 Oct 2002, 9:42 PM
Calming, nice.
on I Wish by liljsmith87 3 Oct 2002, 9:41 PM
I don't know too much about poetry, i am still quiet young in the scheme of things, but this is a nice daydream, reality does play a part. A road we all must eventually face. It's still nice to dream though. Sorry about the score, but you didn't have any use of real form in your writing, just content. We all learn as we grow.
ps- hope you find your girl.