Re: a comment on untitled by bluwiz	6-Nov-02/6:10 AM
uh oh. yeah, that was a booboo. sorry for that. 'she' is supposed to be the moon, but i suppose it makes it so confusing. i was refraining from using pronouns, but. *sigh* think i should do it over?
Re: Ambiguous Love Poem For A Girl I Once Knew by poetandknowit	28-Sep-02/12:49 AM
it's nice! the thought is honest and clear.
Re: .real- by Aggreddion	28-Sep-02/12:33 AM
nice images! it leaves me a bit confused, though. maybe it's just me?
Re: a comment on Virus by bluwiz	20-Sep-02/9:17 AM
guys, thank you so much for the comments. i really really appreciate it. will try to read your poems and return the favor. thanks. constructive criticism very much welcome. :)
Re: The Shedding by bluwiz	18-Jul-02/6:05 AM
awww... thanks. yes, i have to admit it's not that good. this was a poem i made back in highschool. shhhh...
Re: Jericho by goldfish	17-Jul-02/7:52 AM
wow... i loved the phrasing... how you said it... wow... and it's not hard to get what it means... one of the nicest poems i've read... so nice... i like the part about the marble and the flower in particular...
Re: Dear Dad by liquidlama	15-Jul-02/12:42 PM
"fucked up fathers is a family disease, like a tumor you can't remove cause it supports the tree." that was a great comparison. nice, a lot of raw emotion, but it could be better. not that it's not good already.
Re: Virus by bluwiz	15-Jul-02/12:19 PM
aahhh... okay. wow. you are so nice. thanks so much. i thought it was you. sorry! thanks for the comments on both my poems...
Re: Infection by bluwiz	15-Jul-02/12:17 PM
wow! thanks! i needed that...
Re: Virus by bluwiz	15-Jul-02/12:04 PM
ah okay. i get it. thanks! but then... sorry, just curious, why did you rate it 2? sorry... it's just that you contradicted yourself...
Re: Infection by bluwiz	15-Jul-02/11:57 AM
really? like how do you mean? thanks!
Re: Virus by bluwiz	15-Jul-02/11:53 AM
it is about people... it's a metaphor. thanks.