on .real- by Aggreddion
28 Sep 2002, 12:33 AM
nice images! it leaves me a bit confused, though. maybe it's just me?
on Ambiguous Love Poem For A Girl I Once Knew by poetandknowit
28 Sep 2002, 12:49 AM
it's nice! the thought is honest and clear.
on The Shedding by bluwiz
18 Jul 2002, 6:05 AM
awww... thanks. yes, i have to admit it's not that good. this was a poem i made back in highschool. shhhh...
on some deleted poem
15 Jul 2002, 12:36 PM
wow. i love the overall style!!! the first 3 verses and the images. nothing like a good picture in your head to get an idea across.
on Dear Dad by liquidlama
15 Jul 2002, 12:42 PM
"fucked up fathers is a family disease, like a tumor you can't remove cause it supports the tree."
that was a great comparison. nice, a lot of raw emotion, but it could be better. not that it's not good already.
that was a great comparison. nice, a lot of raw emotion, but it could be better. not that it's not good already.