Re: Prison Dinner 'Lady' by scitz	28-Jul-03/10:31 AM
Haha that's great
Re: The Heart of a Man by Queen of Tease	27-Jul-03/1:14 PM
Damn What have men done to you? Or what have they not done for you?
Re: a comment on Dildo (formerly titled "It") by http://bandgeek	27-Jul-03/1:11 PM
sure i meant guy in the sterile not sexist way....... i mean now that you've told me that it is about marraige i can see that...but if one would read it w/o being told they will have a hard time in figuring it out and prolly will not be able to
Re: The Rose by Queen of Tease	27-Jul-03/1:09 PM
sweet little poem "in it's rose colored wear" i don't think a rose has one certain color. One can prolly saw RED but they can also be white, pink, orange, a mix of all the three, or even violet. and you used rose in the line above so it sounds repettitive. "gentle perfume there for my nose to consume" is a nice rhyme but the word consume makes me think of eating up everything greedily. gentle/consume sounds kinda weird unless you meant it. u should keep it in a vase with water or it will wither and dry
Re: a comment on Dildo (formerly titled "It") by http://bandgeek	27-Jul-03/1:04 PM
eh the thought of marraige rarely enters this 20 year olds mind so maybe i did not see it. i however own a kayak and would never rent one
Re: a comment on Dildo (formerly titled "It") by http://bandgeek	27-Jul-03/1:02 PM
rented dildos...hmm u could start a biz that does that you can set Rent-a-Dicks up at various motels across the country. i'd recommend the Hilton. Maybe you can get the two Hilton sisters to be spokeswomen or even teh Olsen sisters
Re: a comment on Monument by geewhiz1962	27-Jul-03/12:58 PM
ok totally ingronre the comment above i'm retarded lol Im FUCKING retarded
Re: a comment on Monument by geewhiz1962	27-Jul-03/12:57 PM
i like this work in progress your style is very prosy i like it did the helium tank really explode? lol only prob i really have is "the bangs had drawn a sweaty crowd of spectators....." it seems too laid back and chill for seomthing that is thrilling and exciting and crazy. i hope to see the finished work
Re: a comment on Dildo (formerly titled "It") by http://bandgeek	27-Jul-03/12:51 PM
well one needs to use it in a poem like this one becuz i have no idea what this guy is talking about. technically it could even be a paintball gun or Skis or even a dildo like you said.
Re: a comment on Dildo (formerly titled "It") by http://bandgeek	27-Jul-03/12:46 PM
Oh I thought it was a U-Haul
Re: Dildo (formerly titled "It") by http://bandgeek	27-Jul-03/12:40 PM
Hmm... What is 'it'?
Re: a comment on #1 entry from Chico, the star stalker on Pico by <{Baba^Yaga}>	27-Jul-03/12:36 PM
we also set them up in the ghettos and sell that shit to blacks and get rich off them and thenwe buy our new ass homes in the hills where there are no blacks but then when the blacks riot over stupid shit then they burn down our stores and the cycle happens all over again so simba that is how the ghetto works
Re: a comment on #1 entry from Chico, the star stalker on Pico by <{Baba^Yaga}>	27-Jul-03/12:34 PM
fuck you! RACIST! haha
Re: a comment on #1 entry from Chico, the star stalker on Pico by <{Baba^Yaga}>	27-Jul-03/12:34 PM
it's cuz we're communal creatures kind of like ants we're all sterile which accounts for our small penises and we only listen to our queen who is a big whore
Re: Memoirs II by http://mulberryfairy	26-Jul-03/11:32 PM
that's great seriously it is
Re: a comment on Poemranker's Recent Infestation of Teenage Girls by 68.75.19.117	26-Jul-03/11:31 PM
yea sure
Re: a comment on #1 entry from Chico, the star stalker on Pico by <{Baba^Yaga}>	26-Jul-03/11:29 PM
i didn't mean suck my dickl i just got home and i'm drunk now i would like to solve this pecasfully so ignore my negative comments earlier but i am not a racist i sayd fucking kroeans and theri kareoke cuz i am kroean and i understand korean obseesion with that fucking cursed device i had to deal with my paretns invititng their friendss over every weeeknd night to sing horribly in fron to of our fuking tv ogodnith
Re: a comment on #1 entry from Chico, the star stalker on Pico by <{Baba^Yaga}>	26-Jul-03/11:27 PM
u think i'm racist? ha ok my white castle poem was about stereotypes saying NIGGER and SPIC doesn't always have to mean to be racist they are words strong words i wasn't trying to be a neo nazi son of hitler shit ok? and i used racials slurs in ONE fucking poems so why don't you stfu
Re: a comment on #1 entry from Chico, the star stalker on Pico by <{Baba^Yaga}>	26-Jul-03/11:22 PM
hey fuck you i am korean so suck my dick
Re: Kakistocracy by <{Baba^Yaga}>	25-Jul-03/1:58 PM
what is kakistocracy