regarding some deleted poem...	4-Mar-03/8:03 AM
Haiku limits words that are needed for emotion. But on the other hand the theme was excellent. Try using what you learned in English, it could help. But who am I to tell you? Do what you want, you're writing is great without me.
regarding some deleted poem...	4-Mar-03/8:06 AM
Great theme. I love the voice of your poem. Friendship is rarely combined with heroism, and originality is what kicks. Great poem. Keep up the good work.
Re: I Am a Snob, or, 'A Definition' by JakeBike	4-Mar-03/8:10 AM
You create good points, but you use stereotypes which are not needed. And what's really uneccessary is puting usernames at the bottom. Let them deal with their own poetry and you your's. I see you want whats best for the world of poetry, and what's best is letting the creativity of the world flow into one. That way. Poetry can't die. You have talent. Use it for a theme more useful.
Re: great caesar's ghost by bondjedi	4-Mar-03/11:17 AM
Degrading towards women...focus your poetry away from offending language.
Re: The Kansas City Chiefs suck by Jeremi B. Handrinos	4-Mar-03/11:20 AM
Doesn't make much sense... but who am I to judge? Keep writing.
Re: Extra Strength Tylenol by DurtKL	4-Mar-03/11:29 AM
Oh my. I love it! Haven't seen anything like that. At first I was like "Well this is stupid" but I totally changed my mind. This poem blows my mind! Mind if I print it out and show it to a few of my friends? Keep writing. You rawk as far as I'm concerned.
regarding some deleted poem...	4-Mar-03/1:54 PM
Beautiful language that you used. Keep up the great poetry =)
regarding some deleted poem...	4-Mar-03/1:56 PM
I love it! Keep writing, I'd love to read more.
Re: Dance With Me by marvelis	4-Mar-03/1:59 PM
Very romantic. Nice useage of language. Keep writing, it's wonderful.
regarding some deleted poem...	4-Mar-03/3:01 PM
Very insightful. Keep writing, I'd love to see more of your work.
regarding some deleted poem...	4-Mar-03/3:02 PM
Interesting . . .
regarding some deleted poem...	4-Mar-03/3:04 PM
Nice, I'd like to read more of your writing.
regarding some deleted poem...	4-Mar-03/6:43 PM
I'm lost. . . nevertheless it sounds pretty awesome, keep writing.
Re: A Vietnam Homecoming by scitz	4-Mar-03/6:45 PM
Very powerful.
Re: Life's Loves Lost by Jigg	4-Mar-03/6:48 PM
Very nice. Talent overflow! You rawk.
regarding some deleted poem...	5-Mar-03/7:33 PM
Very good =D I like how you used your words to create a nice flow and suspense =) I'll be checking out more of your work.