Re: I'll love you Heather, for ever and ever by TanHand	26-Feb-03/7:24 PM
Scourge.
regarding some deleted poem...	26-Feb-03/7:24 PM
No difference at all. Either will do, in a pinch.
regarding some deleted poem...	26-Feb-03/7:32 PM
Because you are an armadillo?
regarding some deleted poem...	26-Feb-03/7:34 PM
Why don't you say something I can take with me? I have read your oeuvre, and find the bulk of your manuscript seems to have fallen out through your thread-bare pockets.
Re: LifeArt by bunniesnangels	26-Feb-03/7:38 PM
Fail. Safe. Both.
Re: The darkest woods ever by Shardik	26-Feb-03/7:39 PM
Delightful.
regarding some deleted poem...	26-Feb-03/7:44 PM
I have posted a poem. Would you be so kind as to profer an opinion?
Re: Goin? Down Baby by Drummer	11-Mar-03/9:33 PM
Angry young man meets question mark? Watch those apostrophes. They don't play nice when you cut and paste. Please fix. Namaste.
Re: Oh boo by Modulo	11-Mar-03/9:37 PM
Please delte "to no end,". Thank you for flying with us.
Re: Klondike by wLeBlancw	11-Mar-03/9:42 PM
I like the "silent insult"; I think 'spurn' needs to be in this piece as well, for the sound, if nothing else. It seems to me as though you need it's bitterness and Mars-like gutturalness, to echo the inner burn.
Re: The Poet by wLeBlancw	11-Mar-03/10:03 PM
Your syntax is awkward: his dog lay in breath? No. Permit me: He had smithed the words; his anvilled pen spilled coins of thought that piled like riches at his feet. His dog lay at his feet, content; its deep, regular breaths bespoke no other need. The sun set and rose, rose and set as he shortened the sentences of people whose decades fell like minutes, mindless of his own. All things became music whose notes he alone could hear: folly and love played melodies he kept to the rhythm of his heart. Death soon lost its thrall: no more the dreaded machine, advancing, merciless. A sweetened darkness, empty, honest as the dog sleeping at his feet urged him on toward eternity.
Re: A true love by prettykristah	11-Mar-03/10:06 PM
Well! Hyde and cried! Now that's a superlative rhyme.
Re: Prest by GregDeEgg	11-Mar-03/10:07 PM
Naught.
regarding some deleted poem...	26-Mar-03/1:30 PM
Indeed. He did not take all of it, I see. But it sounds as though you did. <sigh> Have a seven; it seems you might be used to something around that size.
Re: One More Mile by marvelis	26-Mar-03/1:33 PM
It seems as though you need to get religion.
Re: Seattle Seasons by Sawa	26-Mar-03/1:33 PM
I like this idea, but you do not convince me.
regarding some deleted poem...	26-Mar-03/1:51 PM
v. What happens next? Excellent start; could use more detail. What details you have are presentes beautifully, so I hunger for more.
Re: Fraternity hazing the sheepdog by horus8	8-Apr-03/7:56 AM
Knowing they were RIGHT, for god and country? And large-breasted american women? And piss beer? Have a 9 for creative knotting.
Re: The Twenty-Fifth of Whenevber by OneFingerAnswer	26-Jun-03/8:08 AM
1 finger, there's a lot of potent emotion here. weed out the typos. read it aloud, and smooth the rhythm. you want your lover back? make these words your surrogate until then. it's worth it, as you well know.
Re: Life's sad song by Brian Tiensvold	26-Jun-03/8:09 AM
pimple. yes. excellent example of the genre.