Re: CoffeeNoBody by webguy |
1-Aug-02/1:44 PM |
i thought so too my self it's just that it is so common a fakery that you can identify it. I'm not professing great poetry if that's what you call it...its just an emotional explosion.
the fact that it ellicited a reaction from you makes it a recognizable and thus, Human (not artificially-crafted) experience
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Re: love cycle by j_beckfield |
22-Jul-02/8:41 AM |
want to add love less? love fool
love hurts hehehe...
great play on words hopeless hapless
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Re: To Kiss by Jody Conn |
22-Jul-02/8:26 AM |
your poem is a case in point that clich??s and worn out adjectives and metaphors can still work. Good Job!
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Re: Little Tub of Joy by Modulo |
22-Jul-02/8:14 AM |
Well, I do not think
A fungal infestation
Can bring happiness. :-)
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Re: Summer Haiku by waltfreakinwhitman |
16-Jul-02/8:59 AM |
great note on a common misconception
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Re: Birth by nentwined |
16-Jul-02/8:16 AM |
image/image/image....good job
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Re: Smaller by Modulo |
16-Jul-02/8:05 AM |
maybe what? i didnt get it
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Re: Love Poem by ferociouskitty |
16-Jul-02/8:03 AM |
your haiku is great:
hails the concept of being
in a master stroke.
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Re: supply and remand by mogwai |
12-Jul-02/4:00 AM |
i dont get it "remand?'??
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Re: la petite mort by poetekzen |
12-Jul-02/3:58 AM |
SIGNING "I love you" makes it work...(signing as i see it makes it a pact, not just lust, but mutual consent to the sinful sex crime: an affair that both parties acknowledge to be wrong but ritually observe anyways...) Affairs as true love is debatable but most people believe that. You captured that here.
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Re: Lonely Soul by faded_twilight |
12-Jul-02/3:51 AM |
Crying my eyes out My heart's bleeding is clich??; try new word marriages, that'll make it work
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