Re: long time no write by New Life Drug |
10-May-03/12:06 AM |
A woman after my own heart -9-
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Re: Search Engine by OneFingerAnswer |
14-May-03/7:13 PM |
Deeply touching but I'm not sure why. -10-
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Re: Sanctuary by Lolly |
14-May-03/7:17 PM |
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17-May-03/1:32 PM |
May the flames never go out -10-
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Re: The windshield-wiper blues by INTRANSIT |
17-May-03/2:47 PM |
Whats a speedo working or not have to do with a truck? I'd give you the money to you if I wasn't planning on buying a drumset, 4 ounces of joy, and fixing my own car. -6-
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17-May-03/4:26 PM |
Well written, very content driven. I can tell somebody has been studying. -8-
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17-May-03/4:31 PM |
Hmmm... I thought that only males could really capture the prison life and love from the inside, but apparently That was sexest of me. A bit mushy(hey, what isn't) but a good read. -8-
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17-May-03/4:36 PM |
Nice rythem, I can almost hear the melody in my head. -9-
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17-May-03/4:39 PM |
Actually quite a bright lad indeed, but considering that I don't really care about war(one way or the other) I didn't find this too appealing. Still as are your others, well written with great depth and clearity of detail. -7-
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22-May-03/3:28 PM |
Hmmm... Almost feels like your trying to say I did this for me. There are better forms to express this idea without, the very cliche exsample of suicide, but not badly done. -7-
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22-May-03/3:35 PM |
Nice, but It really doesn't stand out from much else I've read tho. -7-
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24-May-03/4:19 PM |
Ouch. D.A., I'll admit you got a skillful satire going here for you, but its worse than reading tax form instructions. I'd give you a zero, cause 1 its not a poem or even cleverly disguised as one. 2 I had to force myself to read it. This isn't story ranker or humor ranker or as Has been pointed out to me prose ranker. Its poem ranker and since ranking this would mean I give it some stance as poetry I'm not going to.
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Re: Talking... by thirdchildofpain |
24-May-03/4:25 PM |
Some style some flare but not really much there -6-
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24-May-03/4:27 PM |
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24-May-03/4:40 PM |
Long, but very similar to his style. Very Repetive, but I think that helps to get your point across. A lovely piece indeed. -10-
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Re: Fit In by A Simple Poet 123 |
26-May-03/8:59 PM |
Hmmm... D.A.'s Vote here with a so much as a real word surprises me. Personally I thought this was good but not worthy of 10. I'd say more like an 8. Its good but just a little cliche, don't ask me how it manages not to be.
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Re: The Best This Dream Can Offer by Deborah Carter |
26-May-03/9:09 PM |
Haha, sorry... I try and see the best in poems but this one didn't seem to make me feel anything at all. I'll say this for you, you managed you be a little chiche, without diving off the deep end but your words fail to make any emotion conection to me. Not Bad, Not Good. Nothing really outstanding other than it doesn't strike me as either good writing or bad. Since I feel neutral to this poem -5-.
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Re: blockbuster by bondjedi |
26-May-03/9:12 PM |
Such Talent such skill, brings a tear to my eye. Since I did get a good Laugh (We're talking 3 whole minutes here) -10-.
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Re: An Anthem for Peace by dougsoderstrom |
26-May-03/9:35 PM |
Yig! I say, Sure you got a message but your just saying it with no style, no flare, no room for any intereptation. Try giving a little effort at being poetic.
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Re: On Wanting to Know The Truth by dougsoderstrom |
26-May-03/9:39 PM |
Better than what I've read so far but still not quite "free thinking enough"
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