Re: Ocular Photoalbum by DreamerSupreme	6-Jul-03/8:36 PM
I like the way you gently tap on the emotional heart string here. Very nice poem. -8-
Re: vacation by geewhiz1962	6-Jul-03/8:42 PM
Please lie and tell me you put no effort into this(cause I already belive you). Its too short and reads very dry. Read the Queen and the Locksmith by Jeremi B. Handrinos. Same Idea(sorta, I think but its hard to tell with Horus8), much better done.
Re: The Zen of the Pen by DreamerSupreme	6-Jul-03/8:47 PM
Very thought provoking. -9-. Even though you ryhmed zen with pen.
regarding some deleted poem...	6-Jul-03/8:53 PM
Hmmm... Right. Did, I miss something? Is somebody reaching out of their depth here to make a piss poor shot at being clever and witty, when they really don't have much to say? Cause it feels like it.
regarding some deleted poem...	6-Jul-03/9:55 PM
Satire, Sarcasism, being a smart ass. Whatever you call it None do it better than you(well actually some do but we'll let this be your moment, Okay?). -9-
Re: i will not come to bangladesh by lost in america	6-Jul-03/10:15 PM
Indeed. Well said. A story well told, as only a slightly seasoned truth can be. -10-
regarding some deleted poem...	6-Jul-03/10:25 PM
Ouch. All the comma, periods, quotes and other marks, hurt my eyes, and the simple Why Why, questioning mentallity, aren't really working out to well for you. Not to mention that its really hard to follow what your saying. I'd vote but I'm in too good a mood to give this a zero. Try rewriting it. There is a hint of depth as to whom its written to but be more specfic. Your poem needs to be either more vague(so that it can be applied to anyone) or more detailed(so that it doesn't leave your reader shaking their head going "wtf", and I don't mean in the good way either).
Re: My Ass Bag by King Abdullah I	7-Jul-03/1:32 PM
Happens all the time. I've already lost three that way this week.
regarding some deleted poem...	8-Jul-03/12:50 PM
Talk about a picture being worth a thousand words. -10-
regarding some deleted poem...	8-Jul-03/1:03 PM
I'm not even sure what to think. Weird is all I can say. Fucking Weird. -5-
Re: SupremeDreamer by King Abdullah I	8-Jul-03/1:09 PM
Whats sad is I'm amused by this.
regarding some deleted poem...	8-Jul-03/1:13 PM
Now then if I could only make my penis bend that way.. Umph... Errrg... OUCH!!!!!, Settle could we just take turns in back? pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaasssssseeee?
regarding some deleted poem...	8-Jul-03/1:15 PM
Ah... I was hoping for something better.
Re: My Ass Bag by King Abdullah I	8-Jul-03/1:21 PM
Wow. I'm impressed by the author's note. Well done, and very informative. You deserve a Maturity Harness... Oh Yeah we don't have any of those. Well here since I couldn't offer one of those, have a D.A. style ten. -=1_0=-. ;)
Re: Everyone thinks I'm Settle by King Abdullah II	8-Jul-03/1:29 PM
Poor you.. I pity your pain, for being mistaken as one of the best poets, on the ranker. How sad.
Re: Musehearts Swimming Lessons by DreamerSupreme	9-Jul-03/11:50 AM
You make alot of friends fast don't you. Very good poem by the way. -10-
Re: On A Night Like This by bazz	10-Jul-03/6:27 PM
Have you ever heard of banal me lad? Look it up cause this is a great example.
regarding some deleted poem...	11-Jul-03/9:24 AM
Buddist can be such silly silly beings. I really think that this could be applied to any incident involving opression or terrorism. -8-
Re: Broken by OnTheOtherHand	11-Jul-03/9:30 AM
Touching, but lacks enough expression of rage and anger to go with all the broken things. -8- P.S. Frasor Allonby, your former cellmate says next time you say he forced you to eat your own shit, He'll make you eat his as well.
Re: How To Make Up Without Saying I'm Sorry by OnTheOtherHand	11-Jul-03/9:36 AM
I think pissing you off was his point. He lives for it. Good Vilanelle by the way. -9-