on Black Hole Soul by Red_is_life
12 Jul 2002, 7:21 AM
Love you
on Sleep of Death by necroscope7
12 Jul 2002, 7:08 AM
I think the rhyme scheme doesnt work very well but with work it has the promise to be a good poem.
Try it without a rhme scheme?
I lioke the ideas init though
Try it without a rhme scheme?
I lioke the ideas init though
on some deleted poem
12 Jul 2002, 7:16 AM
I dont like the last line but i like the idea of the poem. I like the image between heavan and hell.
on Uninformed, pseudo-philosophical thoughts about existence by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
12 Jul 2002, 7:17 AM
One of the only ones of yours that isnt sick but i like this one.
on save it from the age by abecedarian
12 Jul 2002, 7:19 AM
I really love this poem I love the images of cities crawling. Really good
on Misplaced Memory by DevilTmptrss
12 Jul 2002, 7:23 AM
Powerful
on WorkingDream by harrytuttle
12 Jul 2002, 7:24 AM
Good but i dont like the end
on Whispers of the Night by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
12 Jul 2002, 7:29 AM
Dark angel i think you dont ever have a clue about any of your poems what they mean I get the impression you are always taking the mick but you could be a talented poet if you put your mind to that instead of being so crass.
on AIDS in a Glass by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
10 Jul 2002, 7:25 AM
You cannot actually have a brain you are a small minded individual with no thought to people who actually are ill. Sick.