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Misplaced Memory (Other) by DevilTmptrss
The lights upon my house at night shine through walls of my homemade hell. Thunderstorms and spirits cry as I weep in tune to a forgotten lullaby. The schreech owl sits perched upon a tree whispering songs of my history. I sit down to listen, he flies away and I am left alone. Alone in my cage I watch the night; the moon and stars that shine so bright. They call to me with silent voices as I stand dying without a home.

Up the ladder: Petrified Perfection

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.5
Weighted score: 5.25
Overall Rank: 4003
Posted: July 12, 2002 12:36 AM PDT; Last modified: July 12, 2002 12:36 AM PDT
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[6] shwenatjadeflower @ 68.12.149.5 | 12-Jul-02/12:54 AM | Reply
i like the movement of it.
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 217.39.70.224 | 12-Jul-02/3:31 AM | Reply
Well at least you have a beak. Did you know that some creatures don't even have beaks? It's true. Ask mummy if you don't believe me.
[9] deleted user @ 147.40.250.250 | 12-Jul-02/6:43 AM | Reply
I like the image of the schreech owl.
[8] Red_is_life @ 212.219.59.126 | 12-Jul-02/7:23 AM | Reply
Powerful
[9] deleted user @ 64.12.96.102 | 16-Jul-02/9:45 PM | Reply
:)
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