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Petrified Perfection (Lyric) by teenangstbrigade
Placed on a pedestool Too Scared of heights so I never really moved at all A world in a fishbowl Trapped under ice six Inches too Deep Concrete Tears only help me sink Like a fallen angel but nobody ever sees Petrified perfection from head to feet

Up the ladder: untitled
Down the ladder: Misplaced Memory

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.5
Weighted score: 5.25
Overall Rank: 4002
Posted: July 9, 2002 1:13 PM PDT; Last modified: July 9, 2002 1:13 PM PDT
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[2] Bachus @ 24.126.113.154 | 16-Aug-02/10:21 AM | Reply
Don't dive Mr. Luganus, for fear of contaminating the pool! But alas, ye snickers bar is unsinkable!
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