| Re: Reasons by little_angel_maria |
11-Dec-02/12:26 PM |
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"for you lovely shape" could use a little work even by my standards, but my dear, I definitely agree, it gets better
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| Re: IM PISSEEDDDDDDDD by little_angel_maria |
11-Dec-02/12:14 PM |
1. Eminem has probably never met you, doesn't know you and wouldn't care.
2. When you are on poem ranker for a little while you'll understand that a large percentage of the population on this site are out of their teens and as such do not -because of even bigger problems- remember what it was to be a teenager with only pimples and boys as your biggest problem.
3. You will see in time that you will get over it and it may seem like a big deal now, in fact, it is a big deal but give yourself at least 2 more years and you'll consider your actions very stupid. But when that happens, don't forget how you dealt with your problem and expand on how much better you can solve your problem.
4. You're in the teen years, everything rubs you the wrong way, it's a known fact. Take this from someone who just turned 18 and is considered a little too wise for her own good.
Hey I liked your resolutions on the year 2003 by the way. stick to them.
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| Re: If I Could by little_angel_maria |
11-Dec-02/12:04 PM |
Lol Razor, do pimple poems always have be considered terrible?
Hey maria, it's naive but sweet.
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| Re: A hug :) by little_angel_maria |
11-Dec-02/12:01 PM |
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did you write this or is this plagiarism?
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| Re: Daywalker by Blade |
11-Dec-02/11:52 AM |
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Is it me or is lamp and post supposed to be apart?
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| Re: Daywalker by Blade |
11-Dec-02/11:51 AM |
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Blade, you really need to get the movie blade out of your head. I bet you know every part of that movie. You and Maria should try not to enjoy the I'm-the-victim, everyone-is-being-mean-to-me rung too much. This is a poetry website. Take a break, like I do. If you wish you could just grab them and shake them, you can't. Besides, you sound extremely dumb and childish (pay attention I didn't say child-like let's not insult children) when you answer criticism with anger and curses. Simply take the criticism, better the poem or get rid of it and start again. Come back when your poems look less like shit(e).
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| Re: one word by Blade |
11-Dec-02/11:38 AM |
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This does not in any qualify as a free verse!!! How can you insult the laws of poetry and call this a free verse?! Nicompoop! Imbecile! Twerp! Dweeb!
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| Re: My Friend? by Blade |
11-Dec-02/11:33 AM |
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Jeez Maria and Blade are getting the last rung since I've been here. Hi blade I'm the bipolar one. I was just about to leave and pretend I did not see the stuff I saw, considering that I have used english wrongly on more than one occassion, I thought I might have some compassion for you. Reading your poem twice changed all that, it is exactly what everyone else calls it: SHIT(E)!!!!
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| Re: My Friend? by Blade |
11-Dec-02/11:22 AM |
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is gonareha some kind of rotten balsamic sauce over rotten kidney beans dish? How about I give you what you deserve for your effort.
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| Re: The Embrowning by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
11-Dec-02/11:16 AM |
Other than you repugnant love for shit ( I think you must talk to
your shit while you poop or something either that or you've eaten shit. Tell me, how did it taste, Like pig meat?) Other than that, this is funny. No really the last line is not sarcastic.
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| Re: The Embrowning by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
11-Dec-02/11:13 AM |
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Do you eat shit or something? and did you vote 10 times for yourself that must have taken a lot of work and courage.
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| Re: The rendition 2 (at the wedding) by ~incarnate~ |
11-Dec-02/10:54 AM |
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Hey where's the will anyway?
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| Re: The rendition 2 (at the wedding) by ~incarnate~ |
11-Dec-02/10:53 AM |
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I like your poem it is funny.
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| Re: The rendition 2 (at the wedding) by ~incarnate~ |
11-Dec-02/10:53 AM |
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| Re: The rendition 2 (at the wedding) by ~incarnate~ |
11-Dec-02/10:45 AM |
Hey, is what the priest saying and what you're saying in some kind of pattern? The count is the same...
And what's the hayden suprise symphony doing there?
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| Re: The rendition (once bad movie night) by ~incarnate~ |
11-Dec-02/10:42 AM |
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You should have made the last line more vehement by adding an !
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| Re: The rendition (once bad movie night) by ~incarnate~ |
11-Dec-02/10:41 AM |
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Ha ha ha ha ha ha ha! that one's good. Doesn't anyone else see the joke in this? Sweetie did you actually like Ya-ya? be truthful.
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| Re: For the boyfriend I don't have by ~incarnate~ |
11-Dec-02/10:39 AM |
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| Re: Haiku by INTRANSIT |
11-Dec-02/10:24 AM |
Nice haiku.
Did you miss me?
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| Re: a comment on Char by Amelia |
17-Oct-02/1:29 PM |
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Bye Intransit, vulcan and living canvass. This time it's for good.
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