Re: This Summers Ablaze by DeadtotheWorld	9-May-04/3:54 PM
My advice, get out of Idaho before you're completely retarded.
Re: Ghosts by unknown^user	9-May-04/3:59 PM
You weild a comma like a Mexican.
regarding some deleted poem...	11-May-04/2:18 PM
The title has to change. The first paragraph is hilarious, and the second tries to hard to pull something off that's unnecesary. so here is what I would save out of the utter tripe in your last paragraph. "Here's my newest theory: The planes were already airborne when a passenger asked if he could meet the pilots. The stewardess graciously took him to the front, barged into the "cockpit", the passenger, who just happened to be of middle eastern descent, screamed "Jihaad!" which of course is arabic for "cocksuckers!" and began to wrestle for control of the aircraft sending it careeneing into one of the two largest phallic symbols there were. Now, if it had only been one, everything would have been fine. No. The freakshow must go on. The process repeats itself all to soon, and now there are two holes side by side instead. No wonder the arabs are pissed. Even they can't stop America's openly gay attitude. ["Here's my newest theory: The planes were already airborne when a passenger asked if he could meet the pilots. The stewardess graciously took him to the front, barged into the "cockpit", the passenger, who just happened to be of middle eastern descent, screamed "Jihaad!] this is good and [began to wrestle for control of the aircraft sending it careeneing into one of the two largest phallic symbols there were. ] write those statements back in with some good bridging, keep your opinion neutral, the more neutral and factual the beeter, but lose all the other crap in the second paragraph besides what's bracketed imediately.
regarding some deleted poem...	18-May-04/3:14 PM
He was a fag you tit.
regarding some deleted poem...	25-May-04/6:48 PM
Please, I would never dishonor my grandmother with such trite smut. You should be ashamed,"heaven's gate" "ascending" let me tell you something when I watched my grandmother die of lung cancer, and her stinky skeletal form crawled over to me with fifteen morphine patches on her sixty pound frame and no teeth, to tell me some gibberish about her being a bad girl and other hallucinations; I can gurantee to you, you nothing of death, and even less of poetry or life, move. I mean this poem is so fucking contrived it's like a given? t will you or can you ever start to tell us what we couldn't already guess you idiot, in any of your poetry? God, you write poetry from the worst possible fucking angles, what the fuck is wrong with you? You've just succesfully described every grandma in the universe. Congratulations. Way to dig crystal. 5.
regarding some deleted poem...	25-May-04/6:51 PM
"I will fly"!!!! "beside her"? jesus Christ, it's like right when I think you couldn't write anything more fucking 'day 1 poetry' you do? You're like a sure bet, it's amazing. Yes, will you fly? will you cry? will you sigh? oh geeze, Will YOU JUST FUCKING DIE!!!!!!! good god, you're like the energizer bunny of contrived poetry.
Re: The truths of war by DeadtotheWorld	25-May-04/6:54 PM
Why is this on the best list? You don't even know the difference between "our" and "are"? If you're going to have shit grammar, do it with some imagination could you? liken me does you asshat.
Re: Spitballing by INTRANSIT	25-May-04/6:58 PM
Could have ended stronger. Needs a new last line.
Re: Lorca: Canción del Jinete by Sasha	25-May-04/6:59 PM
Is this yours, or Lorcas, or both?
Re: Lorca: Canción del Jinete by Sasha	25-May-04/7:58 PM
I see so basically you take your shit poetry, and mix it with great poetry, and hope for the best? How inventive.
Re: Lorca: Canción del Jinete by Sasha	25-May-04/7:59 PM
Now that friend is bow'ls... I mean I've seen some sad shit, but that's the gravy. How's that working for you so far?
Re: Lorca: Canción del Jinete by Sasha	25-May-04/8:51 PM
So lord! It's even worse, it's your translation of Lorca, making it both of yours? My friend that's just plagiary with a dash of brains and a dollop of cross bred boredom.
regarding some deleted poem...	25-May-04/8:55 PM
Well I got to line 2, passed gas, and gave you a 10!
Re: Suicide of the Ego by Drifting Shadow	26-May-04/1:57 PM
This should be a penis monologue. Wouldn't this make MORE sense if you were saying this to your lap?m I think so, yes, I do.
Re: The Babe in the Alligator Pajamas by caitydee	26-May-04/2:28 PM
As a young man, I thought there's not much I can hope for with this horribly deformed two inch penis, it wasn't until I discovered that my outrageously teeny pud could knock a retard up at fifty yards that I fully began to understood that the lord does indeed work in mysterious ways. Now, three trailers, three fires and five domesticate disturbance charges later we have decided, hey let's have three more! That way we have enough to go camping for real, and watch them do all the work! Sometimes I really think Hitler did achieve something? He forced even more morons to move around the planet in bigger herds to soil their wild oats fearlessly in the hopes of replacing all of those deaths, and hey, nucleur or not, families are the future, just look at all of those young leaping arab boys with c4, they have moms and dad's and twenty brothers because 19 will die along with the jews, somebodys got to do it, I mean my two kids are too chicken, they only know how to watch barney, fart, pee, eat, sleep, and do it all over again, and yours is still so small. Lets fool them as long as we can, okay, and hide the real world from them, that way we can stay on this island of safety and keep breeding FOREVER.
Re: Child of Troy by Caducus	26-May-04/2:54 PM
Scone
regarding some deleted poem...	1-Jun-04/11:36 AM
What a fucking joke, I wish JUST FOR ONCE, the stupid pointless shit that makes up your pathetic existence worked on me.
Re: Sex Mob by nothingtoanyone	1-Jun-04/11:39 AM
Unreadable BBQ'd tripe
Re: A Mod Proposal (of Modest Proportions) by coolassbob	2-Jun-04/1:22 PM
Shrapnel
Re: I'm Back! by wEdible Underpantsw	2-Jun-04/1:23 PM
Swit