Re: flying home by daniella |
29-Dec-02/3:33 PM |
this is the first free verse that i've read AND loved!
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29-Dec-02/3:36 PM |
i agree with the others...this is good!
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Re: Is It Love by angel_uy |
29-Dec-02/3:45 PM |
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29-Dec-02/4:07 PM |
this is very cool...and i do think the periods are charming!
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Re: Instantly by Quarton |
29-Dec-02/8:00 PM |
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Re: I gotta be me! by bondjedi |
29-Dec-02/8:26 PM |
not brilliant but i like your attitude so that's enough to justify my voting!
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Re: At The Gas Station by Tsoots |
30-Dec-02/10:54 AM |
the last line is what makes the poem...it just jumps at you. I kinda like it.
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30-Dec-02/10:55 AM |
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31-Dec-02/9:12 AM |
where ever did you get the inspiration for this poem?!? gotta appreciate virgin girls with emerald eyes such as myself...
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4-Mar-03/4:09 PM |
i know how you feel. in fact, i think i wrote the same poem in my head at one point...
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Re: The Word by Tascobar |
4-Mar-03/4:40 PM |
lol i think this poem is worse then the one that i previously read...the same one you so coldly judged. eh. what goes around comes around!
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Re: A Life Short-lived by WHeYe |
4-Mar-03/5:27 PM |
i want to thank you, mysterious one, for your comment on my entry...your poetic talents far surpass mine! this poem paints an even clearer picture itself...but i eagerly welcome you to analyze my poetry whenever you'd like! take care.
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Re: Quadroons by Shardik |
4-Mar-03/5:46 PM |
and this doesn't suck...how? i'll stick to the "shitty" american poetry
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Re: I Am a Snob, or, 'A Definition' by JakeBike |
4-Mar-03/5:51 PM |
lol this is gold because it's so true...i have the same stupid shit scrawled on my books as well! :) thanks for this!
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4-Mar-03/5:53 PM |
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Re: Summer by MaliqaTara |
4-Mar-03/5:55 PM |
oh how i can relate!! simple and i liked it.
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