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Re: Make a wish by thepinkbunnyofdoom 25-May-03/11:22 AM
"pour me a glass of apathy"

ha..great opening line..

..7?
Re: A Vietnam Homecoming by scitz 16-Apr-03/2:38 PM
10..because i say so..

What a killer ending..
Re: Dance With Me by marvelis 16-Apr-03/2:37 PM
i hate rhyming..but this was actually cool..
Actually, the last two lines were cool..

i'll widen my vocabulary, and give you a 5.
Re: kruder&dorfmeister by rockinindividual 16-Apr-03/2:35 PM
I totally wish i hadn't given your other poems 10s..or 9s...or whatever...because i think this blows them ALL away..

I might have to think about this for awhile..because..i can't decide whether captitalization would work better for this one..I know it's not your style..but sometimes they flow better..or whatever..

I LOVE THIS!..mmm 10..i am thinking..
Re: The unlucky Janitor haikus by Bachus 8-Feb-03/4:50 PM
...poor janitor...
Re: haiku's i love but i cannot do them well enough by UAFANTHORPEY 1-Feb-03/6:21 AM
haha i love you.
Re: this tuesday morning by teacup 10-Jan-03/5:56 PM
mmm...i like this. images that i can relate too.

don't you hate standing at the bus stop in the rain?
Re: Lost Lamb by debased 5-Jan-03/8:08 AM
...sort of agree with the dude above me, but I love the first stanza. And the second for that matter...I'll think about the third for a bit...
Re: your voice soothes me in the dark by rockinindividual 4-Jan-03/7:46 PM
okay dudette, want me to quote the parts i like? i'll quote the whollllllllle poem...

looky looky! she's MY friend! MY genius friend!

I'll give it a ten....a bit impartial...but even if i hated you i'd give you a nine.


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